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[Salvos] 465. Interlude - The Inoria Empire Part 2 (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-23 18:40:03
Edited:
2023-04-14 06:27:06
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

Comments

Dalton Everhard

The interlude was great! Loved the pacing of the story, thought it was well done.

conkerer

Hmm, the pacing is impeccable, but im not sure if the impression you're giving is what you intend, across the last 3 large conflicts I think we have followed Jaako and friends as "a perspective from ground zero", but the repetition of the alternate point of view and the fact that Jaako and friends don't seem to really have their own character arcs or large development or growth (and I don't mean just leveling up) makes the wars and the world in general seem smaller. I'm starting to wonder if the scale of the conflict is something like 1000s vs 1000s.

Elaine

good chappie

Moatdog

I liked it a bunch

Sean Hibbitt

I like the interlude :) helps build the fluff :)

Lon

You know, I am loving the pace of the things that are happening. And this fight between Jaakko, Helen and Zack against this Demon reminded me of my D&D games, of a party doing lot of damage to one singular enemy and managing to win because they do more stuff than 1 enemy in the same amount of time. But then.... this guy isn't even a combat specialist like most Demons huh, he tame wild demons to do his bidding? that is quite strong and he can pack a punch against humans too.