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[Salvos] 549. Endless Expanse (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-03-15 09:21:52
Edited:
2023-05-26 14:58:34
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

Comments

Matt Cannon

Burnout is no good. Been there done that. Have you tried doing puzzles? Chapter is great though! Was space magic used in the construction of this layer? I've had the thought that this entire palace is built "outwards" towards the void. Also, stalactites hang from the ceiling, stalagmites sit on the floor.

EsZeus

Burnout sounds bad. And the quality of your stories will be a result of that, then. Take a break or something

Azrie

Chapter was great. Enjoyed the city descriptions quite a lot. Sad on the end. Thought it was ally :(

Ihaxlikenoob

Our first descriptive look at demonic architecture and it's something straight out of Inception and the trippy not at all helped by the corruption trying to unexist the entire city. I fuckin' love it. It's so surreal, especially the city also sitting on the ceiling. Also hurray, for more levels for Salvos. Her DE GS should be ready any time now, if not already.

Melone

Hamburger

jayu

“… instead, it attack me.” Attack -> Attacked?

Pantheon

If you gotta take a break, you gotta take a break. Burnout is a slow, insidious foe. I’d rather have a gap in posts from you now than risk you not being able to post at all later on.

Elaine

good chappie

Pablo

Don’t let the corruption get to you as well! Maybe try writing another side story to mix things up? Either way I’m loving the chapters so make sure to look after yourself first :)

Vg7

If you need to take a break you should take it :) I am pretty sûre a lot of your readers like me would prefer for you to remain in good health !