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Azrie

Nice chapter. Was missing Rachel a lot, can't wait for her to meet Oriur, though I doubt it will be easy.

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter!

Matt Cannon

Feedback observation: Rachel goes through a few reasons why the rumors of wyverns are real in her internal monologue, but when talking to other people does not mention any of those reasons. Just makes a very dubious assertion and begs "please believe me!" Salvos is the one that makes crazy statements and acts on them. Rachel has struck me as being a tad more methodical. Be interesting to see some actual debate in this chapter.

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

Should it be "the least"? "However, the story which Rachel believed the most was how every night at the stroke of midnight the ghost of a baby Wyvern would appear at the fringes of the Central Square,"

Melone

Thats the most Willy „Oh.“ chapter ending ever, I love it