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The Balance continues. hope you enjoy.

CW: [threats of violence toward character][threats of non-consensual memory modification to character][manipulation][emotional blackmail]

the youtube version, if you prefer:

https://youtu.be/qc_HKHcBxMU

and the file and transcript have been added to the Redacted Records Index: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1ZO8D3fDIWXVYIuCMW_7MjBTUd6Y96csMvrSmlQvKNFI/edit?usp=sharing

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juli

future me, how are we doing? edit: WHY WHY CANT THEY JUST BE HAPPY GOD 😭

carlos

I’m shaking in my boots, I fucking love ANGST FUCK YEAH

Gemmyrose

this story is unendingly riveting! How they connect and intersect, the amount of depth each character is given; it draws you in and just keeps pulling until you are completely lost in the entire universe. it's been said endlessly yet still bears repeating; absolute genius!

Sakura ☁️

Well what a way to rip out my heart and stamp on it damn 😭

lenora

great

Rose Lacey

BLAKE YOU BETTER NOT!!!

Multiduel

I have been dying for this next part but this is an even worse cliffhanger than before and I live for it

heather

you’re a genius erik

Crimson Wolf

Omg this is leaving me in suspense I love this so much can't wait for the next part love you Erik ❤❤

ejunkiette

'My version of compassion' - Blake, you bastard. I love it. No holds barred. The stakes are real, and this storyline is really kicking off! AMAZING. >:3 <3

Locke

Thanks, I hate it :)

Bambi

blake,,,, 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Kale

I’m so happy to be getting more of this story!

RainyDay

FUCK I'M SO STRESSED i hate him so much godddd i was willing sunshine to spit in his face the whole time. Got my fingers crossed that sunshine will prove Blake wrong and show him how much of a problem their unempowered self can be. I'm also very curious about Blake's listener; why their life is in danger, why Blake needs to work with CloseKnit and do so much harm in order to save them. I have a theory that Blake knows CloseKnit is planning something big, maybe more Inversion-style attacks, and wants to keep his loved one safe using some kind of death magic; maybe trying to force Brachium to protect them the way he helped sunshine. But Blake fundamentally doesn't understand sunshine's bond with Brachium, he can't grasp acts of kindness without some aspect of control or fear. Ive been on the edge of my seat for this whole series, I can't wait to see what comes next!

ReaTheLaw

I'd really like it if somehow Blake's friend found out about this and helped save Sunshine. Maybe they and Eli could team up. Also could someone remind me, do we know what kind of Magic user Blake's friend is?

Lovely Deviant Alyssa

Grrrr... Blake makes my blood boil! But at the same time, everything about him and his actions that make me feel so angry... Those are exactly the elements that make him such a great, incredibly well-written, and complex antagonistic force, from the perspective of Elliott and Sunshine's plotline. Fantastic work! 👏 I was on the edge of my seat for the entire audio. And when the whole Memory Modification plan was laid out, my heart instantly sunk into the pit of my stomach. NOOOOO! MY HEART CAN'T HANDLE IT! 😰 Needless to say, I don't trust anything about this arrangement. I can just feel it, something is going to go awry. All the alarm bells are blaring. Plus, my mind is spinning with possibilities, in terms of the reasoning behind Blake's involvement in all this! I'm assuming, at the moment, that the person he's, "doing this for" is his Listener. But it could also be for someone else, as well. Very intriguing. I have so many questions! Either way, as things stand right now, I can wholeheartedly agree with one point Blake made here: I definitely don't empathize with him, lol. But in all seriousness, this was an amazing installment, in all aspects! It made me feel a whirlwind of visceral emotion! It was awesome. I was enthralled, the entire time! Plus, it was so cool, to learn more about the intricacies and overall workings of Memory Modification. Which brings me to another thought: Closeknit is somehow in connection with a d(a)emon!?!? Oh, I bet that's a long, and complicated story 😳 I look forward to hearing the next installment! I can hardly wait! Again, wonderful work!

SebCastellanYES

Please. If you let us experience Elliott hating Sunshine I would die. I would literally just stop existing. Also being a memory modifier daemon must suuuuuuuuuck. I have a whole new appreciation for Cam, that poor sweet thing. Also a new daemon? Scorpius? I hope we get to meet him but also I am afraid. I was sad and angry and screaming silently the entire time.

Syn Unknown

This shithead. I thought I disliked Kody... but then you went and made this brussel sprout. wtf rik. ... I *guess* thanks for all your hard work. ^^

Wallflowerloud

I want to give Blake a paper cut and pour salted lemon juice in it. 😤

GravityRose

How the fuck do you sound so sweet as one character and so asshole as another! ❤️

Starlena Scarlet

I wait patiently for the next part and this is what you do to me?! Make me cry?! How so very dare you?!