Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 168 (Patreon)
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September 29, 2024
NOTE: This chapter is almost as long as two chapters.
After a full month of voting, the poll I did about ‘slice-of-life plot’ vs ‘action plot’ was exactly 50/50 in terms of what people like more.
However, that being said, there have been a vocal few who really want to see more plot soon, and so I tried to cover several things in this chapter (which is why it is so long).
It shouldn’t feel rushed, but it’s also a lot of steam.
Hopefully we will be able to get to some more of the non-steamy plot in the next chapter.
I should also have a chapter of Combat Healer ready soon, possibly for next weekend (the next chapter of Combat Healer will have some pretty significant revelations about the story, including some revelations you guys probably aren't expecting).
Enjoy!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
When I first started this story, I wanted Kai to be a believable 18-year-old virgin, hence there was a lot of him being overwhelmed (and the women in his life being very assertive). However, now that he is getting more experience, I feel it is believable for him to become more assertive.
(I feel like I've done a pretty good job of having a believable transition.)
There will probably continue to be situations where the women in his life take a more assertive role, but hopefully you guys are enjoying him being the more assertive one as well.
1. Thoughts on the scene with Michelle, Rebecca, and Elizabeth? Hot? Not?
2. Thoughts on the bonding? Good? Bad?
3. Thoughts on the tails?
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