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December 9, 2023

NOTE: Hope you guys enjoy this one. It does end on a bit of a cliffhanger, but it can't be helped.


<< Chapter 52 | Ch 1 (Book 1) | Ch 15 (Book 2) | Ch 29 (Book 3)


- CHAPTER 53: Unity -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

I said at the beginning that this cliffhanger 'couldn't be helped' and the reason why is because we need the 'next' italicized part (of Ch 54) to go beyond this point in Allister's part. Feel free to theorize though.

1. Did you enjoy Mel's part? (And her cool attack?)

2. Did you think the 'pink fireballs' thing was cool?


Chapter 54 >>

LIST OF STORIES >>

LIST OF ARTWORK >>

Comments

Silent Count

Oh man... this will be a nice end to my day of moving. I can feel it.

Twigret

Amazing chapter as always! Can we please have another combat healer next?

KaizerWolf

It will probably be a chapter of IDH next week, and then the next Combat Healer chapter will be an early Christmas present, lol.

Rhys

I'm guessing something nasty showed up as his back was turned......... Either the malevolent Eldrich mother or the eye that possessed Grimaldi.... Odds are at 5 to 2, any takers? LOL (The wager aspect is said in jest, to clarify).

Rhys

I agree, as the meme said " The number of cliffhangers....... is too damn high!" LOL.

Rhys

The Mel part was great. The signal"soft flare" was pretty nice too, had a real "Gondor calls for aid" scene going in my head!

Christopher Miller

The battle with Mel, Val and Lyla was very cool. The interaction between Allie and Jacky was nice to see. Looking forward to the next chapter in two weeks, but looking forward to IDH next week more... sorry, not sorry lol

Moi465

Nice chapter! The village signaling made sense. This could easily be a great anime! :D I love that you released it on Saturday, I could actually read it in peace lol

Pedro Comenda

Hope you’re feeling better. Don’t overdo yourself if your still sick.