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Hey All!

I'm getting my feet back under me, and hope to have the new chapters up soon! But in the meantime, here is the story of the Hot Tub Incident, mentioned in the Hells Belles episode "Water the Fish".

I hope you enjoy the peek at what the demons were like as teenagers, specifically around 16 or 17 (mortal equivalent anyway, because demons age slower!), especially Greg in his emo phase. 

As always, please let me know your thoughts and critiques for how to improve. This was just written for fun, but I am always looking for ways to improve my craft.

~Jaysea 

Comments

Gary L Helmers

This was so much fun. I loved that we got to see these characters as teens, but there are strong indicators of the adults they will become. It also shows that the friendship among these 3 goes way back. Well done.

Anastasia Keelor

Such a good chapter! But (and forgive me if this has been mentioned elsewhere) isn’t samael Lucifer’s name?

Rixi Urdaneta

this is so nice being able to see the deep history that bel, greg, and angel have 💕 we love a good trio!

Mykal Neff

after confusion and research no. I thought so too, But they are different

Kayla

How is it that I can love how much you write and still never feel like it’s enough? Just never want to leave the hell’s belles world it’s so comfy

Kendra Aubry

Lol there is truly another level to reading this sweet vignette when you're wine-drunk at a "you should really know better" age ❣️❣️ Your writing is amazing and we are all invested in the story and the world you've created

Kat Waterflame

I'm trying to make sure my pdfs are in proper order, so I can re-read them. Where in order, from what you've written so far, would this one go? I currently have it between 4 and 5, because that's when you posted it, but I want to be sure I've got it numbered properly.

Shauna Best

Loved this story. Would like to see a name pronunciation guide. Sut (soot, suit, sŭt?)

Dominique Travis

Oh I don't like Ammit. Love the story. Baby Bel, Greg, and Angel are awesome

Lauren Cooper

Am I the only one who caught the brief mention of Bel checking out a GUY?!?! Why has this never been mentioned?? They’re BOTH BI?!?! Dude, that needs to be a storyline!!!

Melody Thompson

I’ve been watching the series since almost the start if not the very start and I’ve loved watching it grow. I’ve introduced it to my sister who’s a fantasy writer herself and she loves it! We’ve been binging (I think that’s how it’s spelled?) the series for the last few days. We put it up on the tv with airplay, anyways I love the world you created and the characters in it.

FreyjaBlight13

Hope you are feeling better! Sending love and hugs!!! You got this!!

Rin Deal

THATS WHAT BLODDY HAPPENED?! OMG Anyways I HOPE YOURE FEELING BETTER

Kat 💜

OMG this is awesome! I kept blessing their hearts, but in a good way. In future news... how many times has Lily made Bel beg? 😈

Erin street

Chefs kisses don't do this story justice

Peter Psareas

loved it. Got really pissed that someone was mean to Angel

Peter Psareas

He made up for it with Penny. I feel very protective of her

Ann Sullivan

Now I need to watch all the Penny and Greg Tik Toks. Love him!!!

Kate

I can't pull it up or download!!!!!

Kate

I need me some young greg.....wahhhhhh

CH

Great story. Very well written

Anjuli

That was great!

Aj Hawkins

Absolutely loved it, hope you feel better, love and hugs

Chloë Kristalsdóttir

I'm pretty sure that exact scenario happened at my cousin's house when I was a kid; minus the demons & succubi.

Amanda Regan

I am in awe of anyone who writes fiction - love this!

Jenn

Well Ammit sucks and does not deserve Greg, especially being mean about Angel

Tiffany Dubois

I loved this so much! Now I need the Ammit and Greg dumpster fire.

Van Brewer

I thought this was really well done. IMHO it is hard to write about chaos, like a full out rager, and still maintain the plot threads that carry the story along, but I think you did a great job of that. Love how this trio is protective of each other early on.

Sam Adrian

I'm not one to party, but I'd be down for that one. Excellent writing. It felt like I was there.

Kristiane Laucht

“Bubble mountain” Greg sure has a way with words.

Cynthia Brault

Amazing story can't wait to read more about the shenanigans they get into!!

Dennis Blackburn

This was awesome. You have a great talent growing there. Keep at it. And thank you.

Chasarae

Absolutely awesome.

Brittany B

I loved it! I can’t wait for you to post more of your writings

David Fouchey

Oh Goddess I loved this one what a great story, cannot WAIT to read more of your writing Jaysea

Ivy Lyn

PLEASE MAKE MORE TEENAGE DEMON CONTENT 😍 also, in “water the fish” there’s a demon who starts to mention that Greg stole something when he was a teen…can you write a story about that if you feel so inspired?

Maiyin

I snort-laughed so many times! It's really impressing, how the mentioning of wings and tails and colourful skin feels so normal when reading, even though the scenario is straight out of an average teenagers life. Also, I desperately crave a video of Greg's Not Beer beer pong melody, because that had me in stitches

CrazyworldofRyan

That was a quite the pickle for Angel, but interesting with the dynamic of Greg and Ammit. Very enjoyable

Phoebe Gildea

Wait, how am I even more in love with Bel now? No fair.

Ainsley Bowers

This is hilarious I love it the others need to know that story XD

Ellie

That was fun! Thanks

Jessi S

This is awesome...... Stories like this from Sharkey growing up would be awesome as well.

Nick

19 pages is a short story?!... Are you learning definitions from Brandon Sanderson?!!