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Interpret the title how you want lol

Its a chunkier chapter this week! Ahem, ladies, gentlemen, & friends beyond the gender binary, it is Bel time. I'm very happy to get to spend more time with our dear FruitBat, and share how Bel & Lily's story plays out. 

As always, thank you for your support, and please let me know what you think!

Comments

Tara

That was intense! I LOVED IT!

Ben Preheim

Aren't Bel and Athena friends? Penny bets on her in the tournament, but we don't ever see them interacting with each other. Or is that a more recent friendship?

Rixi Urdaneta

Luci STAGED their meet-cute?! I am meltiiiiiiiiing

Melodee Glatzel-Smith

Listen. I've binged all chapters up to this one in the last 2 hours. They are incredibly good writing. But you know the line that broke me into uncontrollable laughing/crying? "As if I'd actually lose at a fiddle competition " 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Dead. So stinking funny.

Kristin Tronnier

First of all - I love it. But I had a thought that went on loop in my brain, so I need to let it out: If the beings of the afterlife can die (or can be killed), what happens to them after death? Do they have a Soul, like an immortal one that comes back as reincarnation, so born again as a new being of afterlife. Or do they regenerate (the same as before) like the mortal souls do, while being tortured in Hell? Could Bel be killed on a mission and still come back as himself? If they die, will they be Judged? Or will they disppear completely, which would be f****d up because, they have too much charakter to not have a soul. I am stuck.

Debra Cimabue

Just a little clarification please. Several times it mentions that as a soul, Lily doesn't bleed. Ho

Debra Cimabue

however, in this episode she has blood on her cheek from beating up a soul. Do the souls headed for hell maintain the ability to bleed for torture purposes?

Cassie Tudor

I have loved watching Hells Belles on TIKTOK and had to come check out the story. I am Not a big reader so I figured it would take me a long time to read. GIRL! First off you are an amazing author and second I literally can not stop readying. I am supposed to be working but I have not gotten a single thing done at work and I am just binge reading.

Melanie Beaver

When I tell you that I cackled, right along with Greg and Asmodeus, I almost fell off the couch laughing so hard, finally figuring out the title and where this was going. Thank you for my new favorite thing to read!

Anthony Hobson

I’ve barely started reading and I’m already hooked to this book! Absolutely amazing work!

lightningfury

Lucifer somewhere "Kismet. Who said only God can arrange marriages"

Katelyn Haines

Okay favorite chapter so far!!!!!!!!

Samantha Pare

YESSSSS 🙌 Iam gonna need to get Brigid to make me a sword one day 😁

Rae

lol Lucifer playing matchmaker feels totally realistic to me 🫠

Elle

So excited to settle in with this chapter! Thanks for sharing with all of us!

Carrie Brooks

What a lovely Saturday night treat!

Elle

As expected, another delightful addition!! I love the surprise when these little nuggets of joy when they come out!

Kristiane Laucht

That was so cute. I'm blushing. You have yet again managed to create something magnificent. I'm not even surprised.

Trish Ramey

Instantly opened to read and loved every second!🥰

Ana-Elizabeth Arnao

Yes!!!! Yes yes yes yes!!!! This is everything I hoped for when I mentally replayed the tiktok of the first time they met. Also Lucifer... love him. Love. Him.

Desiree Mcbride

Hey where's the sword I asked oh I gave it to the new addition as she beat the tar out of someone

Callahan Noelle Davenport

Oh my goodness so GOOD! I also love Lucifer planning all of it 😂 so magnificent ♥️

Celine Gorman

In the best way possible; I’m 16 again reading my wattpad novels and itching for the next chapter!!! You are an amazing writer and I can’t get enough of your stories whether here or on tik tok!! Keep up the amazing work!!!!

Elizabeth

I want to know why Lucifer wanted them to meet. He was playing matchmaker and you can’t convince of otherwise. I loved it

Mortan

Im going to go ahead and hit the like button anyway and read this in the morning (it is a bit late for me). You have yet to have a chapter that wasnt amazing so i'll just assume this one will blow my mind. Thanks again for all your hard work.

Carrie Brooks

My dear, the next time imposter syndrome takes a shot at your writing skills, tell it to take a flying leap into Mt. Doom! Then post that writing online so we can read it 😎

Mhairi MacMillan

Okay I loved thisssss! I love all of your chapters so far and can’t wait for the next instalment

Embeth Arreyn

Perfection!! I love Lucifer setting them up :D

Delia Isaac

This was so good! Fucking Lucifer indeed!! This was perfect and I asked everything about it.

Sarah Erickson

Yes, yes, yes!!! You are a fabulous writer. Can't wait to read more!!!!

Kim Bowie

LOVED IT! But, you did a video showing Sharkie's reaction to Bel and Lily meeting. Now you're going to have to decide which one is canon. Unless I missed the chapter about Lily meeting and adopting Sharkie.

Belle

My coworkers think I’m crazy now because I squealed obnoxiously loud when I saw the update notification!!! Phenomenal chapter I’ve reread these chapters so many times and I’m so happy to keep rereading this new addition 🥰

Katie Landis

Omg I need more. Please just inject it straight into my veins.

Staffan Lindell

I read about a content creator who broke under the pressure from their followers to constantly update a story. I sincerely hope you are not experiencing the same because your writing is amazing. Especially counting the fact that you don’t have an editor. Please continue at your own pace.

Christopher Holland

I love the story so far. It's great to learn how it started.

Jenny Shaw

gaah!! That was so awesome!! I hope that you're drinking up all of this praise and adoration like a fine wine, and not letting your imposter syndrome try to lie to you about it! This is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. (But I will. Patiently.) I grew up reading Jean Auel and she took 10+ years between books. And I'm still waiting for Pat Rothfuss' third book. Again, patiently. So take all the time you need. :)

Amanda D

That loud Squee did not come from me, nope not at all. Lovely update.

Angharad k

This is worth waiting for You are amazing and bring a sense of calm about a fear I've had all my life ❤️ just know we all love your work and I am utterly and totally addicted ❤️

Brooklyn Gotelaere

You’re writing is actually amazing. Please know that you genuinely are amazing at this, and it’s okay to feel overwhelmed. But just take it one day at a time, your talent is definitely worth sharing. I’m also selfish because I love this story so much! My only true input is during the conversation with Lucifer there is a back and forth, I would add maybe one more “says Lucifer” type of thing. Just because it can be slightly confusing who’s talking. Excited for your next chapter! ☺️

Illana Navas

If your window suddenly breaks I’m sorry, the noise I just made was at absolutely inhuman pitch 😅 loved the chapter, eagerly awaiting more!!

Maryann

The sound I made when I couldn’t scroll any further and realized I’d gotten to the end… phew! You are an amazing writer, I can’t even find the words to accurately describe how much I loved this!!! It’s incredible to have a peek into Bel’s mind. And that you need the chapter knowing we were all going to be hanging on the edge of our seats waiting for Bel to speak and Lilly to recognize his voice…. Ugh, perfectly executed frustration! EXTREMELY well done, and thank you SO much for writing and sharing these. 🤩😍🤩😍

Van Brewer

Best yet. This isn’t just good, this is a totally fucking delightful read. Just as I look forward to every new episode, I also look forward to every new chapter. Seriously, it’s like unwrapping a surprise gift!!

Ellie

Thank you!

Dana Walsh

Loved the story and writing style. Only might suggest making the size of the font slightly bigger before you make it a PDF, it’s a little hard to ready for some people.

Shawn M McFadden

Jaysea!!!!! That was absolutely, positively UNFAIR!!!! That abrupt end just as the story was getting even better!!! Notice I didn't say was getting good, because your stories are incredible! I'll add my voice to the squees that occurred both from the fact that there was a new chapter, as well as that fucking cliff you left us hanging from at the end!!! Keep up the awesome work, Jay. All the praise you see in these comments is very deserved. You have woven a fantastic story and created a beautiful world that I think all of your fans wish could be real.

Finley Klee

What a treat to wake up to this new chapter today. I just love how your paint the setting with your words. It's wonderful to get to know what the characters look like, what hell is like, and get more of a glimpse into their inner thoughts.

Kat 💜

You had me at Greg 😁 I do have a question, though. How long has Lily been there since time isn't a construct?

Laura Rennhack

AHHH!!!! It's so good!!!! I love the interaction between Lucifer and LIly! Your writing is so good and I honestly CANNOT wait to read more!!!!

Robin Reed

O. M. G. That is a beautiful read. What a great introduction to the beginning of these two 💜💜💜😊

Ann Sullivan

OMG a million times yes!!! Love it!

Ainsley Bowers

AHHHHHHHH THANK YOU LUCIFER! That chapter was perfection I cant wait to read more. You are such an amazing creator and writer.

Kat 💜

And something comes to tip you off of your stool! Hello, Hello! My my my my, what have we here? What a surprise What a surprise 💜

Nikki

Love love love this

Judy Sullivan

Oh wow.....That was SO well done! I love the set up .... Left it by accident, riiiiiiight. You are definitely hitting a stride!

Meghan Schill

AHHH!! OMG that was amazing!! Loved it! Also, having watched the tiktok of them meeting, the moment Bel saw Lily "Hello, hello" started playing in my head lol. Awesome as always!

Nova Stitch Creations

That was absolutely amazing!! Perfect wind up. I was bouncing in my chair! Great job!!

Artwish

Literally screaming! This is so good!

Cynthia Brault

I would love for this to be a book(like a paper book), one I would read over and over again

Kat Waterflame

Only because my brain wouldn't let me not mention it, there's a typo at the top of Page 4. It's just a small thing (Luifcer instead of Lucifer) but my brain fixated on it. <3

Rachel

I’m so in love with this story 🖤

Julie Logue

So badly want to read the next chapter!!

Samantha Johnson

They keep getting better! I was gonna hold off and wait for a couple of chapters to build (see how well that went?) But so worth it! Every page just leaves me wanting more.

Samantha Johnson

P.S. When this is finished I will absolutely 💯 contribute or outright pay for a hardcover to be made just so I can have a signed copy.

Ivy Lyn

Your writing gets better with every chapter!!! This was SO good!

Jessica Tanner

I agree 1000% with this. I re-read from chapter 1 with each new chapter added and can say I will NEVER get tired of reading this storyline 😍😎😍😎

Ainsley Bowers

Me too I will totally buy this as a book.

Stormy

That was exactly how I imagined their meeting! I loved it so much! Thank you!

Maiyin

beautifully written, I am so invested in this story! But I thought Sharkie and Lily met first?

stefani gaskell

I am so excited to see how this story plays out o love watching hells bells on TikTok. You are amazing

Harrison Bray

THAT CLIFFHANGER WAS MEAN AND I AM DYING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! 🤣🤣 I love this story and I’m trying to get all my friends to read it and watch your content!!! You’re my favourite creator!

Natalie Vandepol

I absolutely love this story and your writing, you're so awesome!! 💖

Elisa H.

I just joined Patreon. What is the chat community mentioned in the tier box?

Peter Psareas

Your page disappeared from tik tok. Cannot ever search for your content. Did something happen

Danielle

Loving your story so far!!! You do an amazing job at character and world building.

Luraa Lack

When you finish this book you should publish it I will buy it so I can read it repeatedly!!!

sally barter

I love this book! Thank you!

Louise Monahan

This was a fabulous part. I really can t wait for more.

Jan

I can certainly see Lucifer singing Don’t Stop Me Now. Very appropriate for “Mr Fahrenheit”. Don’t blame him for being annoyed at losing to Bel singing Tequila.

Ryan Massey

Absolutely amazing! You're storytelling and character development is is perfect.

Wildfyr69

OMG! I fell in love with Hell's Belles on TT. Found out you do them UNSCRIPTED, then found out you're publishing the backstory on Patreon. That was the straw that broke the camel's back. I HAD to come support you and find out how good you are when you can actually take time to write things out and edit.... Let's just say, that when you publish, I will do what I do for few authors and pay for each and every book you write. (I survive on library loans and Amazon Unlimited due to still having children under 18 in the house. No, I don't kick them out, but I do expect them to either continue schooling or help support them selves after high school. I've even managed to acquire another one along the way...😁) All that to say, your writing style strikes a chord and I love your world-building and character development. It doesn't drag on too long, or seem so rapidly developed that the reader thinks that you just can't be bothered with the details. Sorry for the run-on paragraph, but doing this on my phone and shift-enter doesn't work. Also- if you ever need an editor/proof-reader, I'd be happy to help! 😁🙈🙉🙊

Lio

WOW. I'm at a loss for words... Just WOW