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For Whom The Belle Tolls - Chapter 10: Battle Nuggets (Patreon)

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What better way for a bunch of nerds to get to know each other than a Universe-wide trivia night? 

As always, you guys are my beta readers, so I apologize for any editing foibles you may see. Please let me know your thoughts and critiques! I LOVE reading your comments!

Thank you for all going on this journey with me

Jaysea 

Comments

Ainsley Bowers

I need this as a full book oh my heavens my whole body was pulled into that story line.

Aly Weitkamp

Oof that ending hit me hard! Incredible chapter as always!!!!

Susan Bardes

Loved it! I so look forward to all the next chapters

Zabrien

Gods this is so damned good. I can't wait to continue reading what you write

Doug

In case someone missed it... deity not diety....

Sunita Buddhu

You need to make this a book … and let me

BadWolf-BadDog522

I absolutely hate …… running out of chapters to binge read!

BadWolf-BadDog522

Absolutely love the story so far… I love the way Lily is developing. And OMG, what is Bel’s story?? Who hurt him?!? I might be just a tiny bit interested, lol.

Aj Hawkins

Amazing, just incredible

Elanore

Okay, slow reaction. You mentioned that Bel was hurt in a previous relationship. Your comment about Bel being hurt again, made me think that he loved another soul before who chose to reincarnate. Did he love a another soul? What was the hurt again referring to?

Amanda Fair

I love it. Amazing read, I really enjoy learning their back ground and seeing how everyone met. One question, how is Bel related to Lucifer? Or are they?

Caitlin P

This was so great. I can’t wait to read about Bel breaking down those walls Lily is still maintaining.

Dalton Quallen

These are so amazing! I barely kept myself from jumping with excitement when I saw an update and almost started crying with the unsaid “again” this is an awesome story thank you so much for sharing it

Tiffany Dubois

I love it so much! I can’t wait for the next chapter! That convo at the end with Greggles and Anel was heartbreaking 💔

AD

Lovely chapter!! Love the first meeting between Lily and Greg! 🤌🏼💋!!

Tara

My goodness this is the best novel I’ve read in a VERY long time!

Osscara

Aaahhh I LOVE experiencing your stories. It's so much more than just reading them or watching on the clock app. I am so completely obsessed 😅 You take me back to being in highschool and finding fanfiction. Except this is so much better because it's all actually cannon 🤣

Carla Vickers

Continuity question, if Lily has already met Greg why did she not know his name when Penny started talking to him in the videos? Still love the chapter and your writing just thought of that video

SeaYaLater
>>100415611

She was surprised that Penny knew him as "Greg" and not "Gregorith", because Greg is very particular about who gets to use his casual name!

Carla Vickers
>>100415611

Oohh okay that makes sense. Thank you for explaining to me! Now excuse while I fangirl cause my favorite creator replied to my comment

Yael

I CANNOT WAIT for the next part!! No rush Jaysea I’m just excited!

Crystal Thomsen

I’ve been watching your videos for Hells bells for a long time now I just found your book. I am loving it so far, I love your videos, and I am looking forward to future works. You are doing a wonderful job.

Brittany Frankowiak

Ahhhh I love this so much. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Been watching your videos for awhile and have loved them so much but this long form writing gives so much more depth and I can’t even express how much I love it!!! Please please please when it’s done publish it so we can all read it again and again!!! Also, if the afterlife doesn’t end up looking something like what you’ve created I’m going to feel so robbed!! Lol

Maria Elkhoury

i can’t even tell you how obsessed i am with this backstory!! i love it so much!! thank you for being the creative and attentive person that you are!!!

Mikayla Andersen

I’m really scared to write this but at the bottom of page four last sentence there is a typo. Instead of the word as it’s just an s… please don’t be mad at me.

SeaYaLater
>>101334541

Don't be scared! It's okay! I rely on you guys for stuff like this! You guys are basically my beta readers and help me catch stuff that otherwise would go unnoticed! Thank you so much!

Amber

Hi there! I am new to your content but as a cult escapee, I want you to know that you have really eased my soul and mind about death and what's next. I devoured 10 of your chapters in a night and only stopped because it was 2 am and I needed some sleep! I absolutely love your writing style, world-building, and character development. You have ignited a long-lost passion of mine (reading and writing)! You are such a great writer and you are really good at hooking your reader in for "just one more chapter" (I said that at chapter 6 haha). Thank you for all the time and creativity you have poured into your work, it truly shows!

OceansAlliteration

I have to say; You are exceptionally good at teasing out the perfect balance of fluff and angst in a story. Thats a hard balance to strike for a lot of authors but you do it perfectly. All that being said, the last part of this chapter had me repeating “They end up happy together, they end up happy together,” to myself to calm my poor heart. Great work.

Chirii

I agree bel I agree grapes are the very best!!!

Felicity Shields

How is it that this chapter has made me laugh out loud AND want to cry simultaneously????

Felicity Shields

In case noone else has pointed it out I think your spell check doesn't like the word deity Your work is amazing JC and I adore it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Carol johnson

This one was good. Can wait. Gonna hurry to the next chapter.

Jay

CHAPTER 10 I screamed when I saw the notification❤️

Castiel Rin

omg hiii! im first apparently. just wanted to say keep up the amazing work! i dont read often but i read every chapter of this the moment it comes out, along with contantly checking your tiktok lol

Rebecca

Yayyyyyyyy omg I love your content it’s so amazing 🥰🥰🥰

Joe Beccue

I can't wait to meet some of the other Belles soon. I just hope Sharkie isn't the first one.

Carrie Brooks

FWTBT always seems to make me laugh, cry, smile, and feel all the feels. Gorgeous writing, Jaysea!

Trish Ramey

Ooh, now I'm curious as to what happened with Bel previously 🤔

CAITLIN CHRISTINE ACREE

Holy f*** loved this one. These are getting more and more amazing and I just want to binge read it through!!

Megan Rupp

Omg, you’re such an incredible writer! I love how you flesh out your characters and bring them to life. And reading about Lily finding herself in her afterlife and making all of these friends is such a wonderful addition to the tiktoks. Thank you for all that you put into this universe, it’s so incredible!

Jasmine Polmanteer

Omg I fucking adore this and you!!!! You’re so descriptive and in-depth, from tone to imagery you are so talented and amazing!!! I cant even begin to tell you how in love with this series I am and how happy I am that you’re making it!!! I can’t wait to see what happens next and to learn more about Bel’s past and how they work through it together ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️thank you for all you do❤️❤️❤️

Kristiane Laucht

I dont think the smile left my face the entire time I was reading this. You have an amazing talent in bringing these characters to life. Making them so real, that one could simply expect them to step from the pages. My heart always feels like it's glowing after reading your work.

Michael Hennessy

That last bit with Bell was chef’s kiss. Such a great chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.

Kat 💜

Oh my heart! I'm okay because I know how it ends up, but my heart broke at the thought. The way you write, the imagery, pulling us in as though we are actually there. I heard and felt all of it. A kiss on the forehead, though! Well done, you!

Chana Lerner

Okay, now that I read this and saw what Greg was like when Lily first met him, I can gether surprise when Penny said she was dating Greg. Like "THAT Greg? I thought it was just a regular Level 9 demon!" As always, your writing is amazing, and my only critique is that there's not more of it! #SpeedReaderProblems

Elanore

Loved it! Who hurt Bel?!? So not cool! I had to remind myself that Bel and Lilly have a happy ending, I was worried for a moment! Thanks sharing!! 😊

Luraa Lack

Amazing ! sad I now have to wait for more 😪I check this damn app every day for more content from you ! Can’t wait till the next one!

Syd San99

Oh my gosh girl.....i know that they get together i know it....but oh my gosh if they dont.....this chapter had me crying

Jessica Tanner

Despite knowing that Lils and Bel do get their "happy ever after" moment, the ache my hear feels knowing that they are both into one another but are too afraid to take the first step......for now. Even if I didn't follow the story on TT it would be obvious watching as an outsider and yet neither one can see it. I guess it only goes to show that it doesn't matter who you are or what your history is beings are still oblivious lol.

Jessica Tanner

I am wondering the same as everyone else though. What is Bel's back story? Maybe a mini chapter like the hot tub incident.

Elizabeth

Thank gods the last one didn’t stay I can’t imagine anyone else with bel but lily

Jen

Jaysea 😭😭😭. The sexual tension, the past pain, the future friendships! Oh mah gawd, your updates give me life!

Savanna Haley

This chapter was amazing!! Can’t wait to read the next one 💕

Callahan Noelle Davenport

Literally seeing this notification pop up has made my day. January is a rough month so thank you xx

Callahan Noelle Davenport

Just finished and it was so spectacular!I am so happy and can’t wait To read the next chapter! Quick note! Deity not diety ♥️

Van Brewer

It seems like Lily’s past has prepared her for this future, as she deftly navigates interpersondemonal? Inter-being-al? relationships. You’re going to have the equivalent of a masters in deity studies soon, but all those additional details are great fun for the story and interesting too. Loving the build out of the cast of characters. Really loved the description of Bel’s vulnerabilities – you have given us those facts before but I never really put them together. That could very much be what hurt Bel in the past. You also gave us some setup about Greg and Penny’s relationship, more to look forward to, I hope. You continue to develop the story well, especially as it’s becoming more tantalizing - you are clearly a master at pacing. I’m hanging on every word, and anticipating what comes next, but tbh my poor ACE soul is screaming for them to strip the sheets and take the fucking paint off the walls!! Several times!! While flying, too!! Way to go, again. You’re a natural, plus you do the hard work to give the story depth and flow. Another 50-star rating.

alexis rux

I know we there’s no point to shipping because there practically married now but I’m shipping hard lol

Louise Monahan

I love the interaction between Lily and Bel but I also love that Lily is so open minded but aware. Its a different dynamic and fabulously done. I think part of why I love it is that Lily's mindset is a good bit my mindset. I loved Angel and Bel holding their breath. Can't wait for more

Randi Mutchler

Either I'm reading these too quickly or, like most, I just NEED MORE!! You are great with your pacing and I love the way you detail. How you mix the love interest with them going through their own struggles. It's soooo good!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter

Nicole Gatcomb

When I saw the word again, my heart broke a little. It makes sense that he would have been with someone before, but I hate the idea that he was left behind.

Van Brewer
>>99942483

Also, next week, perhaps the book club can discuss the fine line between "master of pacing" and "cruel evil genius of edging".

Emily Barteaux

I was hanging on every word. I am in awe of the way you add detail to a room. The way you described the pub and everyone in it made me feel like I was sitting in a chair next to Lily, seeing everything she was seeing. It made my heart race and I love that in a good book! I loved this! Well done!!

Thomas Forrest

Long time watcher, new patron here. This series is AMAZING. I was entranced by it so much that I stayed up binge reading until 3am, knowing full well I had to be up by 6! The writing is immaculate! I went from laughing to crying to heartfelt all within a matter of minutes! I can’t wait to see where this goes, (especially the smutty stuff that’s bound to happen sometime soon 😏)!! I’m hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for more!!!!

Judy Sullivan

Aaaaaa! The way you left it is perfect, but Aaaaaaa! Looking forward to the backstory there…

Abigail D

Holy Moly - they keep getting better, darling! Thank you for another chapter, now get some rest and recharge! <3

Stuart Grosse

Very nicely done. A bit of proofreading before publication wouldn't be amiss, since I saw one place where you forgot the 'a' in 'as', just as an example. But the story and pacing are great. There are rambles, but they don't get too long, and serve to immerse the reader in Lily's mindset. Very nicely done.

C. M. Alongi

"What's the name of that terrifying level demon?" "Oh, his name is Greg." "Greg--GREG? Greg." (Lost Nurse, pt 2)

Samantha Johnson

Okay Greg is officially my favorite, I adore them ALL, but greggles is my favorite and i absolutely cannot wait for more. I simply adore the world you have built and with every chapter it just gets better.

Anna Fultz

I love this! You are doing an amazing job at turning what started as a tiktok skit into an amazing story. I can't wait for each new chapter to see how Lily copes with the changes in her life/death. 😍

Melissa

Once a week is so not enough! I need more!!!!!!

Ben Preheim

solid chapter! Greg is one of my favorites, so it's neat to meet him again! interesting to see how far the've both come now. Couple of gentle critiques (SPOILERS for anyone reading comments that hasn't read the chapter) - page 6 when Chesma calls Lily "mortal" - needs a comma just before that, and my (admittedly sleep-deprived) brain had to re-read that section a couple times to understand what had happened. Could use some reworking to be clearer on exactly who had spoken to correct her. Also page 15, the second paragraph starts with "Angel" and then in the next, she's telling Bel he can stay if he wants, but that shift in focus isn't as clear as it could be. My tired brain thought Angel was walking her home for a second.

Opal Evergreen

your writing is amazing! these chapters are always the highlight of my week! I've been watching your stuff since the beginning and I'm so happy I get to experience more of what comes out of that brilliant mind of yours. I am SOOO looking forward to the smutty stuff! I love the way you describe things, I just love everything that comes out of that mind of yours!!!

FreyjaBlight13

So much love and appreciation to you! I would love to know any book recommendations you have. I love Fantasy smut 🥰🥰 LOL

Finley Klee

Ugh, so good but also now I'm wondering how Bel's heart was already broken, and also as always feeling, deeply, that sadness in Lily with her lack of heartbeat and adjusting to being dead. This was, as always, incredible.

Alexis Crespo

OMG I almost got mad at Greg but I get where he's coming from. I'm loving this so far and I cannot wait until this is a full book.

Nancy Martin

The hold these characters have over me is massive, if you decide to publish this as a book sign me up for pre-order!

Ryan Massey

I feel like a junky over here jonesing for the next chapter. I love it. The in depth charter development is amazing. Amazing!

Ivy Lyn

I fucking love these chapters. You’re an amazing writer! I’m so intrigued as to what Bel’s past heartbreak is

Ellie

Thank you! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

Eileen O'Connor

I hope you keep this going and give us more of Penny and Greg’s love story! I’m loving this but also so excited every time I catch a glimpse of Greg or Angel