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For Whom The Belle Tolls - Chapter 22: Extreme Fussitude (Patreon)

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Did I make myself cry multiple times writing this? Yes. Is it because it's an actual tear jerker of a chapter or because I am secretly a huge marshmallow who gets big feels about Sharkie? That's up to you. 

No spice warning for this one, but we do get to see a bit of Bel's world, so minor heads up for injuries and monsters. 

Thank you all for sharing this journey with me! I'm already planning the next one (even though this one isn't done yet!) 

Comments

Andy Johnson

Yay, I finally get to read one on time!

Elle

Can’t wait to read!! Hope I don’t cry 😅

Jackie

I’m either up really really late or you’re early!

Elle
>>108619558

my heart already hurts just from the first page 😭

Nikolas Murphy

Damn it! Tear my heart out! I know I need to feel more, but why the sad feels? Especially in the first few pages! Love your writing and how you bring your world to life, but damn, I have gotten too attached to the characters to not sob like a child losing their favorite toy or friend after a play day!

_Samikate_

It’s an actual tear jerker 😓 So well written though

Randi Mutchler

I am bawling so much!! It hits me so deep in the feels!! I love your writing!!!

Tara

We definitely need a T-shirt with that final scene please! So so beautiful 🥰

Kristiane Laucht

So, crying in a carpark is a thing I do now. My boss just came out and checked on me. As for the chapter itself..... No words, just tears.

Peyton Stanley

MY HEART!!! God's above I love our little family. Sharkie is such a sweet little friend and it's so precious to watch her grow up into the fearsome protector we know from tik to. And I loved Bel before from tik tok. But nothing like how my heart aches for him now

?Eli?

This chapter was so good 😭😭😭 I loved every minute of it. Even the sad parts😭

Peyton Stanley

Lily is such a goddamn amazing . I don't have a noun to encompass how much I respect her. There are people that you just wish nothing but to watch them get the HEA they've earned and damn she's one of them. It's why I love this story so much

BaconVader

I just read this chapter. It was a little oniony in here. Loved it. Also could be titled “A Family is Born”. It was beautiful.

Megan Rupp

I love these characters so much. You’re so good at bringing them to life on the page and in your skits

Kelly Jackson

Beautiful. You’re doing a great job giving the characters depth and vibrancy. They wouldn’t have the strong family fabric we see in the videos without these emotional ups and downs. Children show us ourselves, and in her quest to comfort Bel, Sharkie shows how she has been comforted. In this episode, Bel has developed even more complexity in coming to his family on a difficult day and allowing them to “fuss.” I know that the act of writing opens us up to imposter syndrome; rest assured that you are no imposter.

Syd San99

You had me crying on page one god damn it 😥😥😥

Amanda

You are an amazing writer. I love your style of writing and I love these characters.

C Williams

My inner child cried in the beginning with Sharkie. I loved it and needed it. Thank you

Kate C

It’s beautifully written and I love how you ended the chapter

JustSurvibing

I cried...multiple times...the feels were amazing and Sharkie is too fucking cute wanting both Bel and Luci as dads. 😭😭😭 I can't wait to see how that conversation plays out.

Thornblade
>>108619558

1. You made me cry on this and I love and hate you for it in the best possible ways 2. The Hobbit cures all

Joedraj22

Your writings honestly make my week! Thank you so much!

Aj Holder

I cried so much especially in the beginning and it was so cute. I love how Lily is forming into sharkies mom. And how she wants both guys as her dad. I look forward to the next part!

Ryan Massey

Oh happy tears. Your writing is amazing! The characters come to life.

Elle

NOT THE HOBBIT, ohh I cried so much! This was so incredible. The softness of the family moments in this story are my favorite.

Anna Fultz

Oh Sharkie. The patience Lilly has with them and their desire to help Bel. I love them so much.

Alexis Crespo

Even tho I'm so tired I am so glad I stayed up. This chapter hit the spot tonight. It was so good that if I wasn't so tired I would've cried. Can't wait for the next chapter

Aubrey Hardesty

Right in the feels......the Hobbit was the first book my dad read to me. The Hobbit definitely fixes everything.

Foxy

I stoped reading for a while so I would have a bunch of chapters to read all at once and I am not disappointed. Your writing is amazing. The story is heartwarming, silly, fun, thought provoking, flirty and sexy. Your cherictors are 3D and not 2D like so many struggle with. Keep being the gem of a person you are and I look forward to the next chapter! 🥰

C. M. Alongi

My dad also read me THE HOBBIT and LOTR when I was a little kid. Now I have an LOTR tattoo on my leg. Dads have good taste.

Nikolas

I’m gonna cry, this is so sweet!

Meredyth Costa

I’m not crying… I just finished all my finals from the most stressful semester so far is all… and was given the most perfect chapter… okay maybe I’m crying… but just a little bit…

Chasarae

I loved this chapter and it gave me all the feels!

Embeth Arreyn

I'm not crying, YOU'RE crying! I cannot deal with how much Sharkie reminds me of my 11yo. He makes special drinks when people are feeling down, too. Once again, I'm blown away by the power of your imagination and your ability to bring these characters to life with such incredible realism. I love going back for re-reads and being able to linger on little details, to appreciate the nuance and phrasing. You're creating, and have created with your skits, a real work of art.

Van Brewer

Yes, tears. I love this chapter. I have a feeling it will be reread to the point of memorization. Getting to see this family you created come into being is a gift. And your writing? I feel loss for nine soldiers that were never alive. I think all of us know people who have had to deal with all the changes necessary to adapt to an absence. You brought that to mind with the family and friends of characters that we’ve never met. Sharkey exposing her vulnerabilities – the essential first step in healing - had me cheering and crying. Sharky fussing over Bel just about broke me. Honestly, at this point I’m convinced your effing grocery list probably has a plot and two story arcs. I’ll bet your Wordle guesses form a complete sentence. I’ll bet your Scrabble scores have exponents, and your post it notes are written in iambic pentameter. Tolkien probably connects with you in dreams to get some fresh ideas. Yeah, your writing is just that good. Please do nourish your soul, so you never want to stop. Much gratitude and appreciation, Bard of the Afterlife.

Phil Mangefrida

I have never lost a soldier per say, but in my 29 years of EMS I’ve done CPR 46 times and never saved one. 4 were on children. Some of those CPR calls have been on friends. CPR was done on my daughter 2 weeks shy of her 4th Birthday. She did not make it. I feel the pain that Bel feels. I can only hope that my Andrea knows she was loved.

Olivia

That was EVERYTHING, no spice needed. I cried, too, and it was deliciously complex and fitting to round things out so far

Amanda W

Yes a tear jerker! I just got off work read this in the car (couldn't wait) love seeing a bit of everyone's world in depth...death is a hard one to overcome....I did end of life care for many yrs (not the same but attachments are made) most were DNR so nothing could be done...

Thomas Forrest

Words cannot describe this chapter and the feelings that it invokes. Please never, ever stop. I can truly say that the world and characters that you have created have inspired and helped so many, and hopefully many more to come. I recognize that Hells Belles and FWTBT can’t go on forever, but I can’t help from thinking that if it doesn’t, nothing will ever be the same. The sheer impact that you and your work have made is unmeasurable by any standard, but know that it is great. Please don’t forget to take care of yourself. As much as we love your content, your health and well-being take priority! Anxiously awaiting the next installment of (dare I say) the greatest work of the decade! (And many, many years to follow!)

Peter Psareas

God I love this chapter. Lily showing Sharkie that adults can love her. Bel’s generating and softer side. Mostly how they are becoming a family. Also with your Tic Tok fans the foreshadowing of Luci as dad and Sharkies paradise. It only took 2 paragraphs for me to cry. I’ll read this one over and over. Thank you Jaysea. You will make a great mom someday.

Juliana

I need Goblin Grim to draw the final scene of bel, lily, sharkie, and max all cuddling in the library. What a heartbreakingly sweet chapter.

Laura Rennhack

I love this! Lily making sure Sharkie knows they are loved and then taking care of Bel and Sharkie's fussing!! It's all so good!!!

Samantha Johnson

I have had experienced authors all published and popular not pull emotions out of me in an entire book/series that you can with a few beautifully written pages. You have an amazing talent and I'm so glad I stumbled across you

La Yuca Mala

This might be one of my favorite chapters yet. It made my heart all fuzzy seeing them be such a loving family. Have Lily be Bels light in his moment of darkness and Sharkie fussing over Bel like that.

Rayna Kenawell

Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort. And comfort is exactly what this chapter was! Thank you! This is my favorite chapter and I will definitely be rereading multiple times

Michelle Sanders

Awww fuck. ❤️❤️❤️😭😭 yep, there's the waterworks. Chefs kiss. I grok so much rightness in this. It's just beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Kim Bowie

Magnificent! You have undoubtedly hit your stride. This was perfectly written.

Dalton Marks

I’m not crying, it’s just raining… From my eyeballs.

Magik Bus

The multiplying nines finger trick! I learned this in elementary school, and everyone that I have ever mentioned it to looked at me like I’m nuts. I feel so validated right now. This chapter is tugging so hard on my heartstrings! I love how they’re all three coming together, and I adore the pacing of it. They’re all learning about each other and growing closer at such a realistic pace, not one that’s dragging out or alarmingly fast. Poor Bel deserves all the fussing. And it’s so great that Sharkie, even after facing such cruelty in life, just is still so caring and kind.

Jenny Shaw

Every chapter I have the privilege to read is better than the last. I hope you never run out of ideas because selfishly, I never want to stop reading about Bel and Sharkie, and Lily. My favorite author of all time is Mercedes Lackey - I buy everything she's ever written. I can see your books being similar in my world. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Aj Hawkins

Ma’am that was awesome, and I do mean that in the original way, I am in awe 🫢

Maria Elkhoury

holy shit what a chapter! i’m obsessed and in love. keep up the good work!!

Daniel

I knew it was bad when the house was concerned but then ughhhhh that heart tearing question 😭😭. Heart breaking, but stunning writing as usual!

Dylan Snyder

I can see why they call it paradise. This story is just amazing

Maryann

This is such an amazing chapter. 🩷🩷🩷 I stole the line “good moms, or mother figures, help us be ready for life when they can’t be in it” and made it a picture to send my mom (love the timing that Mother’s Day just happened). But in all seriousness, I would buy the crap out of stickers or cards or whatever if you got @goblingrimm to make it into official merch. Very poignant line in an incredibly beautiful scene - yes I definitely cried, it’s not just you. 🙂

Matthew King

Is someone cutting onions in here??????

Marloes

You had me crying more than once in only 17 pages, that's gotta be a record of some kind

Vera and Onyx

I did not miss the “curled his tail around LILY’s calf” bit. That seems so intimate.

sally barter

I ugly cried and laughed! Every chapter is worth the wait and my subscription. Thank you… seriously thank you for all of it! Hells Belles, The early stuff with Linda, your life updates everything. Thank you for being a creator. You add light to the darkness! ❤️

sally barter
>>108625102

The only way I was ever able to do nine times tables (still is and I’m 39 now 😂)

Elizabeth Richardson

My morning routine has become: Turn off alarm, use the restroom, check for new chapter. It comes before checking my email, before brushing my teeth. So here I sit, teeth not yet brushed, dogs still asleep, not a single light on in the house. You are doing wonderful things with this book. You have so much talent. As an avid reader always looking to add a new author to my list, thank you for giving us this work of art. You’ve got me hooked.

Nicole M

That was so sweet. I love the image of the family cuddling together. Poor Bel and Sharkie. The family development is so wonderful. ❤

Amber

😭🤣❤️

Jes Land

Aww such a cute chapter.

Kelly Semon

When Sharkie returned and snuggled in with them I officially became a puddle on the floor. So precious!!!

Jeff James

I can no longer deal with individual onions, now it's commercial bags.

Kat Waterflame

What's the finger trick for multiplying nines??

Kat Waterflame

Also, did I read this after being dealing with jury duty and being awake for over 24 hours? Yes. Did I need the catharsis it gave? Absolutely. My normal line is "I'm not crying, you're just blurry." But, this time? I was absolutely crying.

Daniel Mann

Dang! These allergies are getting harsh around here. Being allergic to “amazingly written family scenes” is such a burden.

Candice Carman

You know the finger trick too! That’s awesome!

Rixi Urdaneta

my eyes are miraculously dry but my heart weeps for all their pain. why does the universe let us hurt? this was beautifully written, a sucker-punch to straight to the feels

Candice Carman
>>108636591

If you hold your hands out and, starting left to right, you put down the number that you’re supposed to be multiplying by nine and it’ll tell you the answer. So if you’re doing 9x4, you put the pointer finger of your left hand down and you’ll get 3 fingers before the finger you put down and 6 fingers after the finger you put down, reading 36. I hope that makes sense?

Kat 💜

You got me with the first. freaking. sentence. 🥺

Judy Sullivan

“Shit….I think” had me cackling! I actually woke teenagers! This is so well done. Bel’s emotions practically leapt out at me. The description of Morrigan after the battle made me cringe! (She’s one of my deities and I can soooo see that happening) Every chapter is more amazing than the last

Makayla

Anyone else wanting to know what "another one" (story) would be

Hooptie

Every freakin chapter gets me, but this one….. this one definitely hits differently. I needed to read this today. Thank you

Karen Wright

Tears in my eyes from start to finish. My mom taught me to read with The Hobbit. All the feels with this chapter...give Sharkie a big hug from me.

Stormy

Omg the FEELS!!!! This whole story is just so enthralling & I can’t get enough! It is such a beautiful thing to watch them grow as a family 💕 amazing job!

Sarah Holden

Ma’am I am at WORK I don’t need to be crying like this. UGGGGH you’re an amazing author

AD

Oh damn. That’s all I got. Oh damn. I thought I was out of tears for today. This so totally hits. This was that good! And on a side note, is it wrong for me hope and pray that when you get around to writing the chapter of punishment for Sharkie’s foster mom and that pastor, that it is so violent and dark and bloody that the greatest horror/gore writers extant would be beyond impressed, and declare their works complete trash and bow to the new mistress of this domain?? Asking for a friend.

Ann Sullivan

OMG I was reading this in between calls at work. My boss is wondering WTF is going on. I'm now laughing through tears.

Ben Preheim

Lily calls Sharkie by the same nickname Diane does for her, without even thinking about it, and that's soooo cute....and that's me in a puddle on the floor midway down page 2. "Someone's inability to love you is on them, never you" is one of your greatest lines from HB and I think it deserves repeating here. Aww. My dad read me The Hobbit too! I was a bit older, 10 I think. and now I'm bawling at work. Happy tears this time. Well done!

Dillo Chan

Maybe a nitpick, but what light are they seeing this scene by? Lily doesn’t sleep with the lights on does she? Maybe the house switched on the bedside lamp for her? And with that, I shall return to my feels.

Stephanie Della Rocca

all the feels... loved seeing Lily building the family she's always wanted

Bex Merhar

Oh wow. This chapter is amazing. I love that last scene so much

Keith Frederick

Yeah, I cried. It’s just cause I’m going through some stuff, that’s all. Not cause Sharkie is the best. 😏 This is the best story I’ve read in a long time. And Lily’s paradise is everything I’ve always wanted in a home. It makes me so envious.

Keith Frederick
>>108667828

Maybe I’ve wasted too much of my life with pop culture, but when Sharkie decided on the name Carlton and said “and it’s not weird,” I was disappointed that the line wasn’t “It’s Not Unusual.”

Momming_with_EDS

As a military veteran, let me say "well done". I appreciated how the "after effects" were approached, as well as the tender response

Peter Psareas

I’ve read this three times now. First for Sharkie. Then for Bel. Next for Lily. I keep finding new things. Sharkie beginning to heal. Bel showing softness and vulnerability. Finally Lily beginning to know her true self and worth. This story is exceptional as are you. Btw I also love Max and Carl. Yes I am calling the house Carl. I bet Lily eventually gives in and calls it Carl too.

Chandra

I’m a military spouse and the scene of undressing and the silence was so real. I wasn’t expecting to feel seen in that moment but it was so pleasant to experience. There was also a sentence where ‘you’ is spelled ‘ycu’, minor AF, but I noticed it and thought I’d mention it.

Sarah

Oh my heart. Just beautiful.

Khamsin

😭 I'm not crying, you're crying! 😭 Also, the part where Lily is telling Sharkie about all of the reasons she is worthy of love... A) grabbed me by the feels and twisted, and B) made me think of this that I saw this morning: https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTRKTUW45/

Shawnee904

I read this at work. Luckily no one was here yet because I started crying. I've felt the way Sharkie felt. Glad she has Lily, Bel, Lucifer and the rest of the afterlife to be her family.

Amanda Fair

I absolutely loved this chapter. You did and amazing job with this book but this chapter….. chef’s kiss!

Kimberly Griggs

Note to self… don’t try and sneak read at work and have people ask why you are crying… This was so good and so beautifully done. My heart broke for Sharkie and then for Beleth. I loved the three “Cs” and one “B”.

Michael Hennessy

I’m not crying, you’re crying. Damnit you do this to me every time.

Ashley Cisneros

This is the most beautiful chapter! I am in awe of your storytelling ability and wait eagerly for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing with us!

Rachel Davis

Oh my gosh I love this story so so so so much! it just gets better and better

Crimson leCreme

My emotional side 💔. My horny side- bel face down between lily's legs in the library... I'll remove myself. Sorry.

Alyssakura

This was such a beautiful chapter. Thank you for sharing with us 💜

Julie McJunkin

I just noticed that I was so happy to read (and reread) this chapter that I forgot to hit the love button. ❤️

Jillian Morris

This is one of my favorite chapters!

BaconVader

Just a question if you want to answer. We saw the fate of the foster mom on Hells Belles and Sharkie’s real mom being reincarnated to gain her paradise. Will we see or read what happened to the corrupt and evil false minister? And in painful and tortuous detail. And Sharkie coming out stronger than ever.

Cynthia Brault

Oh this chapter brought so many tears to my eyes. The ending was perfect ❤️

Angharad k

I want to say as some one who lived a sharkie life THANK YOU your story for her is so healing 💖 and I'm working though so much just reading your story ny husband is finding ways to help now I have sharkies words to show him words I've never been able to say out loud thank you from the bottom of my heart you truly are an amazing story teller

Cassie Tudor

Holy shit am I bawling. Also it’s freaking hard to read and cry at the same time 😅

Ivy Lyn

This one wins the prize for best title AND the one to make me cry!

Jessica Hengel

I was crying by the end of page one. That's not fair!

Kat

I am so in love with their character arcs. Crying, happy, I am getting all the feels!!!

Shauna Best

That was the best chapter so far. Trying to make me cry at work is not nice

Jordan Yeager

Like my fifth time reading and I still sob every time. How could anyone not love sharkie? They’re such a sweet little genius.

Iris Del-Tin

Im crying so loud, it's almost pathetic. I love this chapter and I need all your chapters in a book!!! That would be my book with de most worn out look❤️

Peter Psareas

I too have big feelings about Sharkie

Samantha Pare

The Hobbit is one of my son's favourite bedtime stories that my husband has read to him so that just added to my happy tears at the Sharkie fussitude.

Erika Wood

I loved everything about this chapter. Ending with The Hobbit made it all the better.

Iv Marie

i was not prepared to see how much of a mom and dad lily and bel are to sharkie

David Bona

I would like to cause many atrosatys to the people how have harmful sharky