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Icarus Chapter II (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-17 19:06:07
Edited:
2024-09-18 08:16:52
Imported:
2026-06

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Sera awakens, exhibiting strange changes following her interaction with the Seraphis Shard. Tension rises as a god-like transformation ensues.

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erocha75

I just finished this one as well. It is absolutely wonderful. Her transformation scene is magnificent. I do however think that the story would have benefitted from a somewhat slower transformation process, maybe in 2 distinct episodes, meaning she might have started changing in this chapter, a day passes, and then her transformation concludes in a following installment. It would have allowed for a more extended, ominous and exciting growth/corruption process for Sera, as well as degradation of the crew (meaning more fear, disbelief/resistance and infighting, only to later be finally fully dominated/consumed by Sera's power). But that's a bit nickpicking, if I may be honest: it is already fabulous as it is. The whole interaction with Riley is so exciting as well: can't wait to find what comes out of that in the next chapter (finale?). Pls give us the next chapter soon!! PS A very minor detail: if her bone density increased accordingly with her muscle density (as the text states), her muscle mass can't be 99.8% of her body weight, as the bones would also be extremely heavy.