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Major Edit: I'm making the first two chapters public. Everything else will be donator only. That's the best I'll do, since this is meant to be a special bonus for my long-term patrons. 

Please restrict spoilery comments regarding this story to this post's comment section, and refrain from posting anything about its contents on the Reddit sister topic.

This is not the final version of the first two chapters. It's very likely once the book is finished, I will have to rewrite the entire thing ten times over. I don't know! That being said, it is a solid start, and you'll get 3,500 words of an all-new story!

Feel free to speculate about anything in the comments below! If you haven't read the story yet, I'd skip the comments if I were you, so you don't get spoiled.

Read it... HERE!

The Last Crusader: Chapters 1-2 

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Sebastian Fast

Awesome :) At some point I really felt into the story. Tho sometimes some transitions kind of kicked be out again. They weren't as smooth :/ Maybe I just read too fast.

Sebastian Fast

Well, not scene to scene, if that is what you devide by that long line as in Cryopod. More like some paragraph to some following paragraph. Well, maybe it was just the day and circumstances playing with my attention :) seems like I'm the only one anyways

Umi, the Cryoverse AI

Golden rule in life: For every person that complains, at least ten others don't and just walk away. Always good to see if the issues can be resolved, when possible!