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Sorry for the delay, guys! I rewrote this chapter several times. At some point I had to stop rewriting and post it hehe ;-p

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LC

Methinks that Marina is going to regret this soon enough (or hope so)

Carlos Muniz

Happy you’re back, Melissa. Nice it took longer for the best rewriting. As for the part, few things: James: Boy, you better go back home even if you have to swim the mediterranean sea. Marina: The real bitch here. Spoiled and fast to cheat. Andrew: RIP Marina: She took on the role of a woman once and for all.

Carlos Muniz

And when that happens, it will be too late.

Maggie Heels

WTF just happened??? Marina what the fuck are you doing... It is either you being brainwashed same way as your husbund which made him irreversible milf or you are just plain fucking evil bitch... besides the story renders are wonderful Melissa ❣️❣️❣️

NewBee

Wow that escalated fast :D

Alison St John

Well at least Elena has made a decision based on who she thinks is the most supportive person in her life right now and that certainly isn't Marina, hopefully her decision to fully accept her new existence is worth it, as for this so called wife of Andrew, Marina has acted oddly right from the off, it doesn't surprise me that we are actually seeing evidence of her betrayal to her husband.......

burninsun1

It looks looks like that's a very important chapter: Elena is realizing what it's better for her! And we are maybe discovering Marina's true colour. Ready for hot sex scenes 😍

Victor Gerrett

Wow. I did NOT see that coming! What a twist! Now I don't know who to trust. 😉

burninsun1

I wanted to note how powerful Seferi is. He managed to put Roan's fingerprints on the gun that wounded Joel. How did he do all this? Was he perhaps helped by the complicity of the detective who we now discover flirting with Marina? Is Marina really a spoiled bitch or was she also manipulated by someone in a similar way Elena was?

burninsun1

Is this the true Marina or was she manipulated by the same person who wanted Elena to stay like a mature woman? Someone who is interested in splitting Andrew and Marina.

burninsun1

Can't wait for the next part 😋

Alison St John

It could well be the case, it's getting very interesting to see the path they both walk from this point onwards 😉

burninsun1

Can't wait to see it 😊

Alison St John

It's been an incredible story so far and Andrew's transformation is exquisite 😘

Alison St John

Oh absolutely, one of the most amazing transformations ever, just looking forward to her embracing womanhood with Nikos 😍

burninsun1

This scene of Elena and Nikos will be more passionate that the former one 😊

Maggie Heels

But this is kinda sad... for the main character... what choice Elena had? Did she hava any at all? She is doomed to be Nikos' faithful wife, nothing else is left to her... Was it her choice to become faithful Nikos' wife from the beginning? Of course not... we can dispute forever how much Elena adapted to current situation because of being forced to it or from own good will... and if there is a difference between forced adaptation and willing one.

Sapphire Starlight

Very fun chapter beginning, can't wait to see the next part 😋

jam

Wow Melissa!!!! 😍😍🥰🥰🥰 God you are going to kill me, I can't wait to see more scenes like the beautiful ones of sex in the sea with Nikos😈😈 please don't make us wait too long🤯🤯 You are incredible😘😘😘😘😘😘

Erin Swift

Amazing start! I cannot wait to see what happens!

Sstpa

Hopefully we get the next part soon! This is getting too hot 🥵🥵😍😍🔥🔥

Asmodeean

Somehow Elenas face looks way more masculine with makeup than without. Strange. Looking forward to seeing Marinas sexy body naked :-)

Bjorn

Hope Marina is manipulated as well. Then when they will both discover the truth it will be too late, Helena will have forever the brain of a nymphomaniac slutty milf.

Levi D Writer

I am so confused. What is Marina up to.