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bouncybubbly

what cute leopard print mules!

MisterGogeta

Beauty clinic I love the sound of that!!

Levi D Writer

Page 13.... I love the way they are saying he is taking on the role.

Alison St John

I don't think Marina has left at all, I wonder if Elena will encounter that mysterious woman again at the beauty clinic, I think they are one and the same person. this really is such an intriguing story Melissa, love every little twist and turn ❤️

Bartoon

Lol. She still thinks she has a wife.

Asmodeean

Wow …. I honestly didn’t expect the next part so fast. Great Story so far. The net closes in on him. Pretty believable. Where is his new weddingband? Did he take it off for the bath? And if so, why did he leave the other ring on?

Kathleen43

Melissa, you are a master storyteller. What a plot! Your art is exquisite too of course

NewBee

Non-invasive? Now im curious what it is if not redistributing his fat cells to some more suitable areas for his role.

Alison St John

I really think Andrew is starting to suspect something is really off about all of this, here's a conspiracy theory, Marina is a journalist, I wonder if this is one big charade to create a story about someone being pushed into an extreme situation and how they react, I think the use of prosthetics is a hint that this will not be a total long term transformation, it's just convenient that at certain points, those that Andrew needs to speak to are somewhere else, whatever the real story is I'm sure it will be wonderful to follow ❤️

BrightHeart

I wonder if this will go a similar route to Job for a MILF with a bit of mind alteration and maybe another person being changed

Phil G1

Joel and Marina hooking up in the future?

MisterGogeta

Very interesting theory! What do you think is gonna happen at the beauty clinic?

Alison St John

I think Elena will have her hips and bottom augmented with fat redistribution from her midriff 🤔

chronoshifter

I have a feeling we'll likely see Johanna again at some point. If not at this beauty clinic, then definitely at some point in the future. I think given that Andrew said that he couldn't stand to spend more time with her, circumstances are going to push them to not only do just that, but for Johanna to be "Aunt Elena's" best friend, pushing her more into the world of glitz, gaudy, glamour, and gossip. This is turning out to basically be Melissa's version of Joe Six-Pack's "His Life as a Trophy Wife" (which is probably my favourite work of theirs) and my favourite ongoing project right now, for sure!

Phil G1

not really. dramatic age progression, different protagonists, different reason for the transformation are just a few of the reasons it's not the same.

Robyn Hoode

That's my reading, too (but what do either of us know?). I can't help feeling that Marina's role isn't quite as innocent as she'd like Andrew to think. Whatever Melissa has in mind it's a great story, beautifully realised - and, in general, I'm not a fan of illustrated fiction but this is so good I'm giving Melissa a pass :)

Melissa N.

That's an interesting theory indeed! :)

Melissa N.

No mind alteration... at least not like what happened in Job for a MILF.

Melissa N.

Thank you, my friend! So glad you are enjoying it. And sure, we'll see Johanna again! :)

Melissa N.

I don't think Chronoshifter criticizing the story, Phil! :)

Alison St John

I am so hooked Melissa ❤️❤️❤️