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Sorry for the delay, guys! It was hard making this part... lots of new people and places to work on. The next one will come out a lot faster!

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Levi D Writer

She's drinking alone while her 'fiance/Aunt' is drinking with a stranger

Asmodeean

Spoileralert… first read the chapter, then my comment. What exactly is he thinking… why does he believe that this meeting is so important for ending his disguise? I don’t really get it. He knew, that this guy wanted to warn him of Mr. Toska… and that he had his phonenumber… So not much to come to the conclusion, that this man would be vital for his journey, don‘t you think? Anyway… seems like he’s going to need legal papers… this should be fun.

Mellissa Lynn

Hm...the plot thickens yet again.

Melissa N.

That's because he thinks there is a plot to keep him as Elena longer than anticipated. Maybe for reasons he doesn't know yet. And the stranger may be the key for him to discover what is going on. Also, he's not sure if the stranger knows the truth about him. So he wants to be perfect in his act as a mature woman.

MisterGogeta

I can’t wait too see more of this! It’s easily my favorite series of yours and I can’t wait for the next part!

Kathleen43

Incredible work, Melissa!

Alison St John

Elena looks amazing, as does Marina, I'm intrigued with Marina's role in all this and she's the one I'm most wanting to see develop in the story, Elena's meeting with this guy was expected at some stage and it's a test that Elena is determined to pass... Everytime I see Elena with a guy, they always seem to tower over her, even when she's wearing heels, so Andrew wasn't a tall guy at all... I can't tell you how much I love this story Melissa, looking forward to the next chapter as always ❤️

Limerick

Awesome work! Hope the next part of journey is coming soon as well!

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2026-09-18 02:00 I just love this series so much..
2022-11-04 09:33

KannelArt

colour me intrigued O.o

Alison St John

After reading this chapter again, I wonder if this is another ploy to entrap Andrew in his role as Elena, mentioning no records of Mrs Samaras could be a way of initiating Elena to bring this up with Nikos, again could this also be the reason why Marina mentions she's only thinking about her Aunty and no one else, are these all parts of the big plan for Andrew's future as Elena full time, oh I love not really knowing what's happening but thinking up all these possibilities, thank you for this story Melissa, I love it so much ❤️

Alison St John

So good to see you on here Kannel ❤️

Asmodeean

Ah... ok, so he isn't as oblivious to the situation as a certain Aisha... I like that. But, honestly, I did not see a hint of suspicion in him about this being a plot to force him into the role for good so far. Sure, he always complains and says, it's too much and too long, but an conspiracy?

Erica Rost

It's starting to feel 'the mafia' this story!

NewBee

I love this chapter and how much theorizing is possible. I still believe Marina is innocent but who knows :D Also if they could forge a foolproof identity and papers for Elena who says they can't erase his old one :o

Aurélie Trave

or a trap made by the husband and the daughters to force him more into the role ?

Robyn Hoode

The scene with Marina seems to be totally unconnected from the story except for her comment (to a stranger - the barman) that her problems are with her aunt rather than her husband. I see she's still wearing her wedding ring. Now, back in Greece, Elena confronts the guy who may (or, knowing Melissa, may not) be something of a key figure to this whole, apparently nonsensical, saga. We're all in the dark here and we're all wanting more - and sooner. This is really developing in an intriguing way. Love it - I just want more :) Any chance of putting all the episodes together into a downloadable pdf some time? I'm in danger of losing track and, being in my 9th decade I have limited time :)

Victor Gerrett

Interesting turn of events. It looks like "Elena" is going to be given some new ID papers to cement her mature female persona even more. I really enjoy the subtle indications that "she" is unknowingly embracing her new identity (e.g., ignoring calls from her "husband" rather than calling him "Nikos"). And Elena looks fantastic in this new chapter. I love her new outfit and nighttime makeup. Well done, Melissa!!!

MonsSlots

How can someone leave Marina alone 😔

MonsSlots

When will we get the next part of journey?

Melissa N.

It was when he realized that someone close to him gave his phone number to the stranger. Page 262.

Melissa N.

Thank you so much, Alison! So glad to see you so interested in the story! :)

Melissa N.

I'm so glad to hear that. Thanks! :-D

Melissa N.

Alright, Robyn! I'll put everything in a PDF! 9th decade? Wow you're amazing! Hope to follow your steps, my friend! :)

Asmodeean

Thank you for your reply. Yes, I knew that he was suspicious, but could not deduct the importance of this meeting with the man. But anyway… I really like the story and your art…

Asmodeean

Seems like her breasts start to sag slightly… nice! A little sidenote: he complains, that he can‘t take off the corset, but in the bathtub, he is obviously not wearing it ;)

Melissa N.

Ops my bad hehe I'll remeber about the corset in the future! :)