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Here's the ending of chapter 15, guys! I'm working on "Xmas" now :) 

Oh, and I'll also post PDF files of the stories in the coming days!

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Aurélie Trave

BOOM ! it was kind of expected, but still a brillant twist there !!!

Alison St John

What a wonderful and unexpected surprise to see more of this incredible story Melissa, now we see to what extent Andrew is no more, I wonder what develops from hereon in 🤔❤️

Carlos Muniz

I see that Elena (Andrew no longer exists) is discovering her femininity in an overwhelming way and will evolve more and more. That's what we'll see going forward. Excellent story. (way to go, Nikos!)😁

NewBee

Those cliffhangers are getting more brutal with each new chapter 😭 13/18 somehow is my favourite pic in this chapter ❤️

Robyn Hoode

Wow! So just how long is it since the appointment for (ahem) 'minor and reversible' surgery? Has Elena (Andrew's long gone) actually been 'awake' but unaware until now? It seems the longer this story continues the more the mystery deepens ... and we haven't learned how Marina (and her husband) its into this. Nikos certainly seems to be taking some advantages. It's good to get another episode so soon. What a story!

NewBee

You think Elena was drugged like on that appointment day the whole time and whatever happened yesterday that gave them a scare made 'Andrew' wake up again?

mike

Wow that’s really good

Nick A

I’m loving this story more an more as it progresses. Now my interest is peaked

Kitty St. Clare

Excited for the next parts of Xmas and Unknown.

bouncybubbly

She was probably kept in a medically induced coma to recover and heal faster for at least a few weeks.

Alison St John

This is what I want to find out more than anything, what devious plans were laid out all along

Levi D Writer

Well you answered my question, Elena is 'fully' woman, she aren't bad for an 'old' woman either. I am surprised Andrew is even hearing himself. Can't wait to see her in make-up and proper clothes.

Asmodeean

„Gosh, I need to cover myself!“ 😋

Idiot101

Wow, another so soon! Thank you very much, Melissa ☺️.. today is my day!

Von hud

“Gave us quite a fright yesterday ” …. I can’t work that out has she been drugged and been up and about doing things or is this the start of the next step of mind control ? Questions and more questions. just love it keep it up Melissa

Robyn Hoode

All things are possible under the Melissa banner! Andrew has obviously been out for some time (weeks even months?) for the healing to take place. I just wondered if he (as Elena, of course) has been mobile but unaware for some of that time.

burninsun1

The transformation Elena underwent is impressive. I wonder what happened to her before the appointment with the doctor and who she met. I'm also very curious about her psychological change. Looking forward to discover it. Congratulation to Melissa both for the art and for the plot. I love all this!

Fra Lanz

OK, now I have to drop my hypothesis before it's too late... In my opinion the woman that "Elena" met at the toilet is the same one she found at the surgeon's. And in my opinion, given the title of the story, it is the goddess Aphrodite who made "Elena" a real woman with her powers ... Did I guess it right?

Fra Lanz

BTW I love it

Taylor458

I love it more and more

MonsSlots

Job for a milf wibes

Victor Gerrett

I'm also curious about the time table here. It makes sense that "Elena" has been drugged and unaware of things until this point. I said before the "Tootsie" disguise phase is done, so let's see where Melissa takes us next! And I'm glad to see Nikos back to enjoy his new "wife"!

Ryan

Really transformed into a beautiful woman. Can hardly wait till the next episode. Btw when can we expect it?

chronoshifter

Even though this seems pretty extensive, I don't think the physical changes are complete this quickly into the story (even though it has been 15 parts lol). After all, that pussy is looking mighty tight for someone who is supposed to be a middle aged mother of two. Personally, I'm hoping we also see her get a bit of that well-known "botox/surgery" face. I know that won't be to most peoples tastes, but almost every AP story I've seen ends up with them becoming a highly maternal, domestic housewife style MILF and seeing something new would just be nice. Given that Nikos is clearly extremely wealthy and yknow, owns hotels and beauty parlours and the like, it stands to reason that his wife would effectively be an advertisement for his facilities, so seeing her go "The Real Housewives" style route would both fit the narrative AND be (again, at least for me) a breath of fresh air in terms of transformations in AP stories.

Melissa N.

Glad you are enjoying it, Charlie! :-D

Melissa N.

A lot of good thoughts, Robyn! Interesting theory about Elena being 'awake' but unaware! :)

Melissa N.

happy birthday even if I'm a bit late, my friend! :)

Melissa N.

Nikos seems to be enjoying her indeed! hehe

BC123

Caught with her hand in the cookie jar.....