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Here it is, guys, the end of "Journey"... finally! It's not my best work, but I like the ambiguity of the ending. As I said before, I've been working on panel stories for so long that the format has become repetitive and predictable. I'm happy to focus on comics for the time being! In any case, I hope you guys enjoy it! :) 

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Alison St John

One of your most stunning of transformations Melissa 💕

bouncybubbly

love the outfit and accessories!

Carlos Muniz

Thanks for sharing that great story, Melissa!

Nino Heđi

So you didn't go with thembanian wedding scene as i mention a while a ago but you added wedding as something that happened so it's good.

Mike R Pen

Thank you for completing this wonderful story. While you are self-critical about the story, it was one of my favorite of yours, perhaps because of the race change. I look forward to your next works.

Andre

Great story. Since, she knows about the tea and what Ms Sani tried to do, it would have been wonderful to see the tea used on Ms Sani. A taste of her own medicine.

Tegan

The final transformation in (not so) temporary roommate was my favourite, but this was a close second. Gorgeous x

Ron

This is a great story, on par with your other stories, especially 'Lesson for the Teacher', my favorite. Please keep up the great work.

King Death

A really great story Melissa and great transformations.

Annabel

Excellent transformation, and a lovely way to wrap up this story

Annabel

Also thank you so much for finishing even though the format no longer inspires you! It takes real dedication to finish something after the creative motivation is gone and I really appreciate you didn't leave this story unfinished.

J

Will there be a pdf version of the whole story?

SheilaSecrets

The most important part for me is that this was a beautiful, subtle visual transformation that I'm currently lapping up again in the PDF 😁. I like the writing a little better in Aphrodite's Mirror, but that's been your more major, long term release for awhile, so it's expected that AM would have a more complex story, more subtle character arcs, etc. Journey is amazing for the relatively shorter, linear sequence that it is, and I'm grateful for it. So, was Ms. Sani's tea some kind of potion? Did some witchcraft compel Aisha to accept her path when Aunt Zainab basically asked her if she wanted out?