Halloween Riff Challenge Entry #6 (Patreon)

Patron Francis Metal has unleashed his video for the Halloween Riff Challenge. 

Some sludge 666 power chords with ferocious double bass drumming, ending on biting dissonance

HOW TO IMPROVE:
What's your feedback for Francis? The sound is heavy and could use more development. Give us a theme or more signature line to latch onto. Something to stimulate the babes imagination. I can hear your power chords turning into a open low string chug, instead of dead space in between. Melody, more references to the root with pedal tones etc muhahaha