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A short comic.

I did this a few days ago, but I didn't post it cause I really enjoyed the last panel and I wanted to post separately. Also I think it was a good idea to hold this cause I was able to correct the dialogue.

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badaimrac00n

May I offer one more suggestion for the dialogue in the last panel? A bit of a correction?

badaimrac00n

Swap the word "let" with "leave" and remove "faucet." It might help things flow more naturally

Dark Naig

Did I leave the shower on? Just that?

Dark Naig

I will change that, thank you :)