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Let's Watch - Ep 1 of Avatar (live action) (Patreon)

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2024-02-27 16:17:48
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SleppyPanda

Its alright as a stand alone but a shitty adaptation

Obsydian Black

I'm only five minutes in and I already hate it. What is with this expository dialog? It's so forced. People don't talk like that. Did they even try? Because if a novice author like me can come up with better lines as they're spoken, just give up on screenwriting. You don't have what it takes and you never will.