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I completed translation by page 10! I'm waiting for proofreading of page 11- last page by my friend, now :) Thank you! 

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Some corrections to this page: - "It does looks" should be "It does look" - "temped the rabbit out" should be "tempted the rabbit out" (a more appropriate word might be "drew" or "lured" the rabbit out) I can help with proofreading other stuff too if you need it :)