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Page 12 "Little Luu" (Patreon)

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2018-09-23 21:37:13
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2018-09
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Completed redrawing character faces version! Thank you <3

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One tiny English thing this time (tell me if this is annoying ;~~;): "I don't have anything I can prove with": "Prove" in this sense is transitive, which means it has to take an object. You can say "I will prove my innocence" or "I will prove the theorem" but you can't say "I will prove". To make this sentence work, you have to say what she's proving, like "I don't have anything I can prove my claims with". However, that's a bit too long for the bubbles you have. We have a word in English for something used to prove something: "proof". So you can just say "I don't have any proof". This is also much more natural to an English speaker. You can hear phrases exactly like this in crime/police/detective shows. I think that would only take one bubble though and you need to fill the other one still, so I'd put: - Bubble 1: "But..." - Bubble 2: "I don't have any proof"