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Hey guys, I just finish the intro story, how do you think this story start?

tell me what you think? <3

P.S please ignore the character portrait art, they are temporary images.

Love ya!
Ryu

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Bara Tales intro story dialogues.

Character and background images are Temporary images.

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James Damant

Love it beyond measure. The intro really makes me want to know more . So can’t wait. ❤️❤️

Georges Martinez

interested in what will happen. For sure there will be issues... xD

Khalenx

If i may, 4 min, with almost only the genie coming in (and the dialogs are also pretty fast); it's a bit long to keep the player focus on the conversation. Particularly if it's the intro, and we are not yet tied to the characters or the story. Everything else is actually at a high level of quality. You keep getting better, congrats !

MrRyu

Thanks for your feedback, yeah... I think too much dialogues might a bit boring. I should make it become 3D scene and add 3D character animation like Hunk city intro. :D

Khalenx

You were pretty efficient on the first version of dead dating. Maybe it's just about the way you tell the story ? that doesn't have to be only through a single conversation ?