Chapter 14 WIP (20/21) (Patreon)

I'm not quite satisfied with it ending on the unknown fate of Vicious so I'd like to make it longer, include the remaining scenes with Storm and Adamant before it ending. So it will be longer, but it may also be a bit late.

EDIT: Added some backgrounds! Only a few more pages to go! I have one more panel to add to page 2. Mouri brought up some really good points about the dialogue, so we changed quite a bit of it! Hopefully it makes more sense conversationally and matches the situation a lot better. And we feel like it hurts Hope's case a lot more, which we love. So thank you for that, Mouri! 

EDIT: Added 12, 13, and 14! Still gotta do shading of these pages and finish the background of page 1. Only a few more pages to go! We're added a scene that was going to be chapter 15, but we think it's short enough to include here, and would end on a higher note than if we ended it after the fight. This'll make it's publishing date a bit late I think, but I'm sure people will understand.

EDIT: Pages 15 and 16! Not sure about Storm's face in the third panel on page 16 but we'll see if I can come up with something better.

EDIT: Page 18! Well, mostly. That small cliff needs to be done. Maybe two more pages? Maybe three. Either way, it's gonna be late to publish, so here's what we have so far.

EDIT: Page 19! And some added shading, added some trees to page 12 (and gave Aggravating a protruding tooth cuz I only had one tooth showing in their last panel and decided last minute to make it a character trait). Added lighting to the evening scene.

EDIT: ALMOST DONE! Finished some of the lighting in the evening scene.