🌹SoL🌹 :: Page 373 (Patreon)

Hey y'all! I need your opinion... Does the little doodle I stuck next to the narration box reading "a child waiting for a bubble to pop" look ok? Should I include it into the final page, or is it too disruptive? I have two versions to look at here!

And Grillby felt something close to desperate impatience begin to mix with his fear and annoyance as the silence between the two of them began to grow.

Just tell me what I need to pay you and get the hell out of my bar you creepy old bastard , Grillby thought but instead of saying anything that remotely resembled that sentence, he chose to go with a friendlier way to break the ice.

“Can I get you anything to drink Don Gaster?”