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A Novel Approach chapter 17 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-08-20 20:03:26
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2024-09-03 15:02:18
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First time breaking in an getting to know Bonnie.

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A Novel Approach chapter 17

January 10th, 2011 Rockwaller estate, Brockton Bay, New Hampshire, 1:30 AM EST -SP:3300 The date with Kim after school was fun. Cutesy and awkward, but she had started opening up to me at least a little bit. It was weird how easily I could let myself fall into the mindset of Nightfall when I was ...

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Plastic Soldier

> dad can ball his secretary I'd phrase this differently. > “Ok, jesus Jesus should be capitalized. > a piece of work.” Unnecessary quotation mark.

Tom

I don't like the whole dual persona thing. Its gonna backfire so hard in his face.. And I'm already cringing at how bad it'll be. The good guy persona is useless except for pleasing Kim. He could do everything he wants while being a villian, except being a boyfriend with Kim. Its a huge risk with no reward. He might as well drink the Dr. Jekyll potion if he wants to split his personality lol. 🤡 Anyway, I much prefer bonnie. Crazy bitch that can be made into HIS crazy bitch.. No need to hide who he REALLY is. Cause that's what he's doing with Kim. Hiding his TRUE self because he wants some grade A pussy. I can't see it going any other way. Kim will find out and it's gonna blow up in his face. 😔 Loved the little heist! Quick and easy. Hope he gets more in touch with that darker side of his. Overall good chapter.

Tom

Also. Why is being evil or doing bad things edgy?? -.- it makes me wonder why people call characters that WANT to be villains edgelords? Do you not think people can be inherently a shitty person that is selfish and doesn't care about other people? A lot of real people are like that… has nothing to do with trying to be edgy. People are just fucking terrible sometimes. Sorry for the rant.

Malcolm Tent

Edge isn't a morality, it's an aesthetic. Like the Joker is a straight up monster but he isn't even slightly edgy, and Batman is a hero and a total edgelord.

Tom

Ahhh. I've only heard the term being used as a way to classify someone that likes doing bad things. Now that you mention Batman, I can totally see what you mean. Is it like, trying too hard to be dark and mysterious? (btw, I've heard plenty of people call joker edgy. I think a lot of people just use it as a blanket term for everyone who is bad and likes doing bad things)

Tom

Like for example: Tons of people call DWS’s villian characters edgelords. And I just can't see that being the case. Those MC’s are genuinely psychopathic and don't give a fuck about looking or acting any type of way. I kinda just don't like the term because since I enjoy villainous MC’s, I see that shit all the time… its annoying. But either way. Keep doing your thing.

thaughton2

Good lord, this dual identity plan will go insanely poorly. It's incredible he thinks it's sustainable, especially if he's not going to stop at low level felonies, and mix in some infidelity too. Kim might literally try to kill him.