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Secret Ending chapter 20 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-03-05 21:23:00
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2025-03-14 22:24:20
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2026-06
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Secret Ending chapter 20

January 10th 2016, Halcyon Penthouse, Gotham City, New Jersey, 4:00 AM EST Despite how great my night was, being around Zee and before her Rose had definitely left me with a problem. I ended up taking a pretty long cold shower, which did kill my libido but made me want to exercise as it energize...

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Son-Of-Scorn

Gotta admit I'm not enjoying the Zatanna romance, its overused IMO, it's in at least two of the previous stories so I was hoping for a fresh cast, hence why I'm happy with Rose, I am liking Dinah as the mentor but hopefully not as a romance option, she's solid but again was used in a previous story, kinda picky of me I get but that's how it is

Malcolm Tent

She's my favorite. Most people don't include her which annoys me. So my stories do. Though yeah, the rest of the cast should be a bit different.

Son-Of-Scorn

It's fair, she's a solid character, one of the best magic users in comic books and she's a hottie so very understandable, just feels a little repetitive to me that's all, if it's just her than I'll probably get over it, again not trying to dictate who or what you use in your story just giving my two cents

Malcolm Tent

It's cool. Just explaining my reasoning. I like her so I include her. She's my favorite. Wish more people did tbh but it's mostly just me for some reason.

Jordan Belmont

Me personally I love the use of Dinah, rose, and zatanna as love interests. I can understand the urge to want different women as love interests. But I can understand using some of the same ones because you like them and you wanna see more stories with them. I'd just like to request grail darkseid daughter because she's hot and it would be funny.

Jordan Belmont

This was a interesting chapter I do not like Kendra. I looked her up her version of hawkgirl is fine but I don't like her. Cheaters are trash, but her kind. The "oh it's just simple fun with friends nobody will be hurt" are super scum. I said it's about guys or girls

Son-Of-Scorn

Truthfully part of it is that I fear that with how similar the powers are, in some aspects not all, as well as the same characters then it just has the risk of feeling boring when I read it, especially if it's set in the same universe, that being said, I wouldn't stop reading over the same characters being used since the quality is quite high

TheRagFromTheCragCorner25

As a fanfiction creator myself and a Lifelong fan of Young Justice I have to agree with the author. Zatanna is not often used in YJ fics as the RO, so it's nice to have someone who regularly uses her