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Call of the Void chapter 13

It was time for my next summoning. I hadn't mastered the eight gates, even with clones that wasn't going to be quick or easy...as I was now. But I had options now. The first thing I did, obviously, was make a copy of the technique manual.

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Zerak

It’s fun seeing how out of context stuff can break a setting when combined. Not sure if this will be a slow burn or fast paced fic, at first I thought slow burn, but depending on the combo it could escalate very fast. I just hope the romance is less rushed than the other stories I read. You tend to just dive into relationships with almost zero buildup (in the stories I read).

Malcolm Tent

As a teenager, my experiences with romance were mostly pretty abrupt. You get interested, you express it, you get shot down or you don't. Not a lot of lead up. I write what I know lol.

Big ToFu's Corner

Dude you pulled him from the Breaker, hell yeah! THAT Manga was my jam untill they went on indefinite hiatus. Let the kid knows he's gonna need to pay attention to political lessons and always punch them in the mouth first. Needs to be proactive not reactive. One of the big reason he was always stuck on the backfoot was because to many people kept trying to push their agendas on him. He needs to big boss that shit.

Malcolm Tent

Sounds like you might not have read season 3? Or did you mean the more recent break between seasons 3 and 4? This is Shi-Woon from like JUST before season 3. Like after new waves.

Big ToFu's Corner

I read season 3 but by then things was to late for him. And finished new wave. Still not a fan of Hyun Won Moon. His greed destroyed everything or that slime serect agent dude thats always on his phone with some puppet master.

Zerak

Fair enough. It just throws me off how fast the characters jump into relationships. I can see it for some people working but not others. Even if they do the transition seems abrupt, like Zatana calling him daddy in their first date in Secret Ending or how fast things get going with the vampire girl. To be clear my issue isn’t how fast he shoots his shot, it’s what follows. Expressing interest and seeing how that turns out isn’t bad, but what follows feels like you skip the courtship into the sex. Or at least jump the getting to know each-other into the we are comfortable around eachother too fast, which would make sense if they knew eachother for a while first before dating.

Melody Haren Anderson

I want to say, while I wasn't sure about this one (though I have enjoyed Naruto fanfic, it's not my go to), but you're really nailed it. Both in characterization and powers and stuff. I love it so much.

Malcolm Tent

Yeah this is post new wave which I loved and pre eternal force.

Big ToFu's Corner

Dude yes, Eternal force was such a roller coaster ride

Malcolm Tent

They're attractive people in often dangerous situations. Sex is life affirming, and he went on several dates with Zee before that actually. Their actual dinner was like...their third date.

Malcolm Tent

Im glad youre enjoying it, its been a blast to write and I have a lot of plans for the future lol.

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the chapter! I hope to be reading much more of this greatly interesting story 😁! And I wish you a very Merry Christmas 🎄!

Risu3007

Fuck yes!! Holy shit, its been years since I read Breaker. I didn't even know there was a part 3. Last I read anything from the author was Trinity Wonder(?)

Drim

More please!

Original Taste

Don't know where to say this, but something is ducky with Patreon here - I got T3 and still had to manually unlock previous chapters (it didn't substract money, but still)

Malcolm Tent

Thats weird, but the fact that it let you do that without charging you kind of implies there might be a glitch on your side. Are you on the browser or the app?

Original Taste

App. It's just never happened before on other creators. Mostly just giving you a notice, because it was very specific to you for some reason

Malcolm Tent

That is odd, Ive never had anyone mention it before so it might just be your app glitching. Ill keep it in mind though.