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Call of the Void chapter 45 (Patreon)

Published:
2026-03-31 14:06:48
Edited:
2026-04-14 15:12:57
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2026-03
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This one was a little tough to write, because it closed some doors, but after thinking about it for a while it seemed like the best choice. I hope I did that choice justice.

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Call of the Void chapter 45

I woke up with a headache. My eyes wouldn't open more than a crack as I sat up blearily, trying to look around to figure out where I was. "What happened?" I groaned. "Was I poisoned?" My head hurt, my mouth was dry, and my eyes felt like sandpaper.

Comments

Gunnar Crider

I think you forgot the link. Or patreon is glitching for me

Seadrake

Damn, Hana is best Girl. That's understandable, but disappointing.

Son-Of-Scorn

Wow that felt very emotional in a mature kinda way, a turning point even, it's a shame cause Hana gets like zero attention and it's a shame but nevermind

Sage Berthelsen

Poor woman but that was handled really well.

Noctus Tagaris

holy crap adults behaving like mature adults? in a fanfiction?! lol jk this was a really great chapter and loved the character interactions

Jordan Belmont

Yeah I hated this. I can understand new kai basically not want to get with her because he's not the man she was in love with. But at the same time he's not the man kurenai or anybody in the leaf village knew yet he's still taking advantage of some of those relationships. All I know is the other women he gets with better be worth closing off the hana path like this smh. The disappointment is unreal

Malcolm Tent

To be fair, none of them grew up with him. All the other women hes met are women who didnt know the old version of Kai. Hana is literally in love with a person who is dead. I get what youre saying but its not really the same thing. There's just too much history there and its not really his. Besides that though, Hana was interested partly because old Kai was a homebody who never left the village and only took gate duty. New Kai is a powerhouse who is going places and doing things. He cant be what she wants him to be.

Jordan Belmont

Yeah I understand that. I'm just now really thinking about how limited his pool of potential wives can be now. Because I don't forsee you bringing over ppl to permanently stay in universe with Kai and join his clan. And hana was a favorite of mine like anko.

Malcolm Tent

Its not limited. There are a LOT more attractive women in Naruto than you think. Trust me lol.

Hangwind

So, I'm not saying this is the wrong decision. But it does feel weird to foreshadow a relationship for so long, only to dump it unceremoniously. If it wasn't going to actually change anything for Kai, why bother? It makes all the portions with Hana feel like filler.

Malcolm Tent

Sometimes things in life get teed up and dont work out. People make mistakes or consider things they dont go through with. The story is Kai living his life. There is no filler, really. I prefer to go for realism over narrative symmetry. Also, while I have been experimenting with flushing out arc ideas more in this one, I dont really plan out my stories. Hana was a potential romance option, but the relationship felt off so I put it to bed. I write progression fantasy, which I consider violent slice of life, if that helps pin down the vibe a bit lol.

Question Seeds

Nah, you're not alone it did the same with me. I only just got to read it.