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JJ

I think you have gone a bit too far with the incest bit. Not really necessary.

Klaasdc

I like this story and cannot get enough of the magical genie granting tranformation stories. It gives me the same good vibe as the magical collar stories. Also because of the more consensual aspect (relatively speaking). But I fear a bit that with this chapter it is moving more into a classic direction where the hero has become (too) powerful. An external threat/conspiracy/enemy boss is added. For me the most interesting character is Madeline because she came up herself with a creative way to circumvent the wishes' limitations. The idea of the breast increase during sleep and bio flux was cunning. I think there is still a lot of potential for the harem characters to co-formulate wishes to be made to change themselves or each other. Personally I'd like to also see more exploring of wicked body transformations, like often found in transformation game stories. Think body or sex swaps, growing extra breasts, pussy for mouth, udder with dicks, ... In any case, thanks for writing, keep it up🙏