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The Final Architecture: Shards of Earth (Patreon)

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2024-05-23 00:04:23
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PATREON EARLY ACCESS! This is an early version of my new video! Check it out! There will be some slight errors as I am still editing the video! The final video will be different in several ways from this one.

https://youtu.be/0zIm1G2_SQs?si=TB6P8tNUTXlyiyJd

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Rhea

Omg yay! I love this series!!

Andrew Trapani

Words stuck together accidentally Typo 1: Text explaining "Unspace travel while awake ..." - "Things from real space such as humanshad a" <- words stuck together Typo 2: Text explaining Ash The Harbringer - "Were a series of vertical slitsfunction unknown" <- words stuck together --- I noted you are very careful to not give away details. Nicely done. --- Special attention to the fear in unspace is highly appreciated. --- I think some small attention to the state of humans after Earth could help. A passage such as "During these years, at the height of the Architect War, humanity is living hand to mount under the constant shadow of annihilation. Everyone lives with an emergency bag and a knowledge of where to go if the worst happens. The entire species suffers from a multigenerational traumatic shock", from appendix Year 51 After. --- I wonder if some special attention to Saint Xavienne under World Building, or perhaps Year 55 section, would help show the reverence people have for Ints, without giving away any more details of the plot. What story or prayer do they say in her name? I couldn't find it quickly. --- NOTE Year 55 section: Saint Xavienne, appendix Year 68 After, aged 15 arrives on a transport ship Samark at Fourthbridge Port at the same time as an Architect. She is able to hear its thoughts. It leaves. It seemed like you stated that Year 55 was when this occurred, or perhaps I missed something. --- The process of becoming an Int is much worse than I felt you implied. Appendix Year 76 After. Less than 10 percent of the volunteers survive the process and come out sane. Idris is 20 years old.

Joseph Nizolek

Good video, as you say some errors, but I had to pay attention to the video to spot them, interesting series, it's been a while since I read the series, so I will probably have to reread the series, just finished Tchaikovsky Alien Clay novel and will be reading Tchaikovsky Service Model special edition from @thebrokennbinding next mouth, but there should room for this series

Andrew Trapani

Also was really busy and had to leave on a time crunch. Overall well done. The atmosphere, pacing, details presented (and ommitted), and instilling a sense of fear was right on target.

Chuckie Reynaldo

You Crazy for this one Quinn!!! Amazing job!

I W

Quinn you truly have set the benchmark for narrative videos mate, well done. This one is no exception, your pacing and control of tone make for absolutely compelling listening. I’m excited for your continuation of the series.

Dan Holmes

Awesome video Quinn Quinn 🥰🥰🥰