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TheAngelicBard

This page is so powerful 😭 so many feels. But also that bulge on the first page. FEELS AND BULGE

Rob MacWolf

Eddie, don't get distracted by the thematic parallels between the sub-narrative and the narrative! The man's available for kissing! His kiss vulnerability has appeared! Now kiss!

Deltawrc

Eddie’s enthralled and perplexed expressions, Dana’s expression as he wells up and cries, finally, Harlan’s expression of devastation all hit so much harder fully rendered. I started welling up myself. It’s all so beautiful in every way.

Marcwolf

Brenny let me show you how much I love you... while your still warm....