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Halloween Video final edit (Patreon)

Published:
2018-09-19 02:08:39
Imported:
2026-06

Content

As many of you suggested, I went ahead and "Cut the fat" on the previous video I posted. I also had many other people suggest I do this. I now consider this project to be "done" and ready to post. Tell me what you think!

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Every Ghost Show FINAL EDIT

Comments

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This is significantly better! You cut some lines I really liked, such as "Where do people on this street park?" and "Wednesdays at midnight!", but I think that was a good move. And you also did a great job with cutting out the dead space between slower dialogue. 10/10

QReview

Thank you so much! Your guy's comments have not gone unnoticed, I swear. I too agree that many good bits were cut between versions, but I think it's also important to perfect the flow. The "Where do people who live on this street park?" bit was the biggest casualty, for sure.