BIP - December (Patreon)

Hello, everyone, and welcome to the first BIP of the editing phase!

I've been hard at work on edits this month, but much of the work I've done has been "behind the scenes" so to speak—determining what exactly needs to be done and how I'm going to go about it. This, combined with the loss of data I experienced last week, means that what's new this month is... well, a character creator and a basic version of a revamped stats screen. Still, I hope what's there turns out to be something you all like. I tried to use the opportunity to make some character creation choice a bit more organic, and to give a slightly more solid backstory for the PC, as well as some insight into a few specific things about Demeter and how the relationship has gone so far.

Of course, how the PC feels about things and relates to her is still very much up to the player, but having a few more concrete details to draw from later will help any version of the relationship feel more grounded, I hope. 

In any case, here it is; as always, I welcome feedback on things that don't feel quite right or areas where it might need smoothing out, so don't hesitate to say so if you think of something like that!

Jess

Play the new version here.