DAY08.SCENE02 (Patreon)

This scene is a bit reminiscent of a past scene where he was cooking risotto as well—this is sort of intentional; I'm trying to show that he's cooking something he's confident about and something that is a staple in their diet. Plus, the girl has bragged about this specific dish, so I think story-wise, it makes sense for him to cook it.

In the scene, Sarah starts to tease him, and I hope I wrote this well. I'm trying to showcase the differences in personalities and also slowly build up to the next scene, kind of like she is doing to our MC ;)

I also hope the awkwardness of the girl being there during dinner was conveyed well and that the dialogue was believable/reads well. I did spend quite a bit of time editing this scene already, but I'll probably keep working on it for a while longer.