Emotion Sickness Page 04 (Patreon)

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Here are the colors for page 4 of Emotion Sickness. Starfire goes too far in her excitement after diagnosing the likely culprit that has been "bothering" Robin. This forces Robin to raise his volume, which further confuses the Tamaranean.

I decided to change the line thickness for the speech bubbles, although I am considering setting the edges to white. With the colored borders I now feel the thickness before was a bit too much, so I've changed them on this and all previous pages, and while at it I made a few minor adjustments to the previous pages.

LINES:

Here are the lines for page 4 of Emotion Sickness. Starfire is excited by her discovery about Robin's current condition, but she proves too enthusiastic about "helping" him. This makes Robin finally raise his voice towards her, but now something seems to be bothering Raven.

This page gave me quite a bit of trouble to line, largely because I'm trying to squeeze in so much text, and I've ended up in recent pages straying a bit off the script in terms of what I've fit in each page (more than was written). I really do need to put more effort into looking at the script again this weekend and fixing that issue properly so that I'm not addressing it while lining.