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Here are the colors for page 148 of Bawdy Falls. Wendy shuts the stream down early due to struggling to even remain on her feet, which triggers Pacifica's insecurities to come out and prove a threat to Mabel's remaining snacks.

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Here are the lines for page 148 of Bawdy Falls. Wendy can barely stand, let alone continue her stream, so she shuts things down early. Meanwhile, Pacifica's insecurities (as well as some confidence) come out, and they seem to pose a threat towards Mabel.

This page took quite a bit of time for me to figure out how I wanted to script it, and was nearly as much trouble figuring out how to fit all the dialogue into the page with the amount of required frames. I was going to do one last page with user comments for the stream as Wendy closed things up, but upon figuring out how I could fit all of the dialogue and frames if I excluded it, I decided that to be the appropriate move.

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Mattcucu

Poor Paz she was not the kindest at first but she redeemed herself, I don't think she has to worry I think Dipper love her much more than she thinks and a lot more than Wendy now

RJ

It WAS kinda in the grey area if Paz was in this for the long run with Dipper, or if she was just having fun. Good to know she's being serious, but she's going to need some serious talking down after that blow to both her ego and soul. Hopefully Dipper can get her back into a better mood (with some "help" from Wendy and Mabel)

Bill #0910

Hard for her to realize how overbearing, demanding, and manipulative she can be. And in matters of romance, she seems . . . selfish ("That should hold me until next weekend.") Live and learn. And I hope Wendy, Mabel, and Dipper teach her . . . with live demonstrations.

Magrittefan

You have cleverly and succinctly captured the differing moods of the three women in just a few panels. Pacifica's insecurities are laid bare and, while I might privately root for a Wendy + Dipper pairing (Wendy is a woman worth fighting for), I actually feel some sympathy for Paz - possibly for the first time! Fine work as always, Incog.

Kronos992

Time for the make up sex!

Dogbertcarroll

Nice to see how much Paz actually cares and Mabel being sensitive enough to understand.

Anonymous

Came for the nudity stayed for the plot

unspiek

I would not have foreseen Pacifica turning out actually to sort of love Dipper. She's always treated him as either a possession or that boy whom she can control.

mjs

Paz is gonna be a makeup mess. Little does she know how much Dipper cares. No butt stuff, but was still a great scene! Great job, Incog! Can't wait to see if there will be a 4way at the end 😋

CurbSideWeg

Incog these pages have been great! so many panels and content on each. love it

incognitymous

Yeah, nobody truly has a problem with her, but given her upbringing and pas antagonistic nature, surely she's at least concerned with how others perceive her.

incognitymous

I tried adding little hints that she was in it for the long run. The way she scared the other girls as she was happily skipping after being invited to stay over a few days, how she was willing to put up with staying at the shack despite the poor condition of it, that she's willing to risk sneaking around her parents, and how she wears the pine tree pendant, were all intended to be little hints that she takes things with Dipper seriously.

incognitymous

It's hard for her to realize at the moment she's doing it, but she is fully aware that she has those characteristics, since as a Northwest she was raised to have them. She did develop to be a character that has more than those things, but it doesn't mean they went away completely, so she's still bound to have some insecurity about it.

incognitymous

Thanks. It really has made some of the scripting a struggle, trying to portray all 4 characters between pages without any jarring transitions, but with how great all of the Gravity Falls characters are, it's definitely been enjoyable being able to portray them each in their own ways back-to-back.

incognitymous

I wouldn't say she treats him as a possession, although she is a bit possessive as a person. I'd like to think that so far I've portrayed her as happy when she can spend time with him, and willing to put up with things she wouldn't otherwise put up with if not for being with him. There's no way she'd be willing to stay at the shack for a few days if she were simply trying to control him.

incognitymous

I considered adding some butt stuff, but there never came a point where I felt it appropriate, and I also felt Wendy is good enough at what she does to consider that something to save for a future show. Don't want to play all your cards at once if you want business longevity.

incognitymous

Thanks. Glad you like them. It's been difficult deciding exactly how and when to do the transitions between characters, but it's been fun being able to work with so many good characters at once.

bun

i very much enjoy mabels reason for why dipper would stay with paz lmao

Zimsix

Sad paz makes me sad

Rhoward682

Love the NSFW, but also really committed to how the story is going to pan out now. This page really added quite a bit more to Paz’s character. Like others said, I kind of feel sorry for her. 😕

Akylas

I did not expect to have such feels brought against me in this page, fantastically done. Looking forward to seeing how this hurt feelings of Pacificas get resolved without causing hurt feeling elsewhere

incognitymous

The story elements are a really fun part to work with with these characters, so glad they're appreciated. And yeah, Pacifica tends to look more reserved and uninterested or annoyed, which it's always entertaining to work with such a character's emotions when they come out.

incognitymous

Hey, worst case scenario it seems she can always fall back on that ice cream for any hurt feelings...although I guess even that wouldn't be without extra hurt for Mabel.

Mikey Likes It

Just 1 question -- What in the hell does NSFW stand for ?