Bawdy Falls 153 (Patreon)

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Here are the colors for page 153 of Bawdy Falls. Wendy reveals the true motives behind her ploy, which makes Dipper aware of the crisis at hand.

Also, since people seem to be commenting on how Mabel appears to be bent too sharply, I decided to redline to show how she is actually leaning in towards Pacifica. Considering I can turn like that, and then bend down enough to touch my floor from my computer chair, I don't see this as seeming uncomfortable at all:

On a separate note, yet again I'm uploading a bit earlier than intended so I can get some sleep. Related to this, I've been considering a slight change to my normal upload schedule. I'm not necessarily having any struggle getting pages ready on time, so much as the current schedule makes it more difficult for me to get a decent sleep on Fridays. Currently I try to upload around noon on Fridays, but my body simply has a difficult time getting my schedule adjusted for that time, since I've always been a night person that struggles to sleep at a reasonable time. This leads to me either having to sleep a few hours, wake up to upload, then go straight back to bed to finish my sleep, or do like I am today, where I upload a little earlier than intended so that I can get a normal sleep immediately after uploading.

For this reason I have been thinking I'll possibly switch my upload time to a bit later in the day, such as around 4PM, because uploading the page just a few hours later will make things substantially more comfortable for me. Everything else will remain unchanged, since every day besides Friday already works out as explained above. 

Lastly, I'm contemplating a change to how early access works, but I may be doing a poll on how you all feel about that before deciding anything. I've been personally feeling that perhaps 10 pages is a bit too much, and causes some issues when it comes to the public releases being so far away. I'm very sleepy right now and struggling to stay awake, so I'll likely cover more details on that with a new post, maybe with a poll, when I wake up later.

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Here are the lines for page 153 of Bawdy Falls. Wendy reveals the reasoning behind her ploy, which makes Dipper aware he must hurry back to the shack.

Well this was a time consuming page. Deciding how to fit in the dialogue was not easy, and then there was a lot of background, which just took a while to line. That aside, with this the scene should be over in 1-2 more pages, depending on how things fit in the next page. That said I should move back onto Emotion Sickness after this page, but I'm actually torn on a few things, so I won't say for sure at this point what will be happening, but that's highly probable.