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What story should replace See No Evil when it ends?

  • Legends Never Die (Historical/Gamer) 419
  • All Because I’m Evil~ (Arcane/Multicross) 88
  • Domain Expansion: Waifu Battle Royale (Waifu Catalogue/DC Comics) 226
  • 2022-04-28
  • 733 votes
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Hello everyone! As most of you have heard, See No Evil has entered its final arc and it should be wrapping up in the coming months. I actually have a commission story that’s taking its place, but I’m looking to post another story alongside it. Which is the purpose of the poll -- basically, I have three story ideas that have the makings for a full-fledged +100k story and I was hoping to get some feedback on what you all would like to see.

I’ll include a brief synopsis of each story for those that don’t have any interest in reading the chapter, or if the chapter didn’t hook you but you liked the idea and could enjoy the direction it goes in.

Legends Never Die (Historical/Gamer): It follows the story of Eivor, a young Dane in Scandinavia just before the Viking Age officially begins. He’s blessed with a Crusader Kings inspired gamer system, but given that video games weren’t a thing in the late ninth century, Eivor can only assume that the Nordic gods are communicating with him through small windows. Each quest is god-given, and every quest reward is a blessing from the gods.

It follows him as he carves his name amongst legends such as Charlemagne, William the Conquerer, or Bjorn Ironside. He travels across the world, participating in great and terrible events, meeting and breaking great figures in history, before settling down to create a kingdom of his own.

Some things to note -- the story will have some light Crusader Kings elements in it while being slightly ahistorical. For the CK elements, it would have some lowkey fantasy elements like ritual magic or demonic rituals actually working. Basically, what you could do in CK II and III. There are also going to be some stories that were inspired by my games, like the time the pope kidnapped and ate ten of my children for their godly genes before calling a crusade on me that everyone joined in on because he was suddenly beautiful, strong, and a genius.

For the ahistorical decisions, I’m just reserving the right to fiddle with the timeline to move up or delay certain events on the condition that they happened in the same century that the story takes place in. And so long as it actually makes sense -- for example, Alfred the Great can’t really be a thing if vikings haven’t rampaged through England. However, if something happened like twenty years in the past when Eivor arrives, and I think it would be good for the story if it happened when he arrived, I’ll just tweak the timeline a bit.

Lastly, the story will be about vikings doing viking things. I figured it would be obvious, but thought I should mention it.

All Because I’m Evil~ (Arcane/Multicross): The story of a genetic transhumanist deciding that the multiverse is his oyster and he’s just going to crack it wide open. Starting in the setting of Arcane, under the guise of Elix, he’s a ruthless ganglord at the head of the Goonies, the only gang willing to stand up to Silco for all the right reasons. As Alexander Heller, he’s a young, suave, heartbreaker worming his way into high society with liberal use of brainwashing to help things along.

As himself, he’s a hedonist that cares only about gaining power and amusing himself with the people that surround him. Often at their expense.

About the story -- Elix is about as morally black a character as I've ever written. He is a grade-A asshole. When I was originally drafting the story, the idea was to make a character that could make something like the Company for the Waifu Catalogue, or the Sex Arcade. So, a real smarmy piece of shit. I’m going to be very upfront about that.

But, as much as he stacks the deck in his favor, he can only enjoy himself if there are stakes. And all he really cares about is enjoying himself. When he gaslights and manipulates people, he gives them avenues of attack. He’s perfectly happy taking an L because, no matter what, he will get what he wants. All the while, he searches for genetic anomalies and abilities to incorporate into himself to become the perfect being.

It’s a jumpchain story. The first twenty or so chapters will be spent in Arcane with it becoming the hub world. From there, there will be a mix of one-off chapters where he visits a setting for a specific item or waifu, then there will be longer jumps where Elix stops and fucks with the setting in various ways. Like, for example, releasing the Grimm from RWBY into the setting of Asoiaf while introducing himself as the only solution to the problem.

A big thing to note -- Elix does use mind control as an offensive tool. He would use it to break a waifu that he doesn’t want to spend the time seducing. For example, Jinx and Vi are the girls being seduced in the Arcane jump, while girls like Caitlyn or Mel would be stamped. Not into mindless sex slaves, but people he would break down until they beg him to fuck them. It’s a limitation and challenge that he finds fun.

Domain Expansion: Waifu Battle Royale (Waifu Catalogue/DC Comics): This story could be considered a true rewrite of Be a Dragon. See No Evil was meant to be a rewrite originally, but it became a thing of its own pretty early on. Domain Expansion follows an isekai that wakes up in the middle of a satanic ritual, gets the fuck out of there, and later realizes that he’s been inserted as Sukuna Ryomen with all of his powers. The ones that he knows about and the ones that he doesn’t.

A simple isekai is radically changed by something of my own invention. I liked the idea of the battles against other contractors in the Waifu Catalogue, but I didn’t really care for the idea of including some OC that served no other purpose than to deliver waifus and points to the main character. So, I got to thinking and decided that a Waifu filling that role would feel better and I had an idea.

The Waifu Catalogue: Battle Royale. Because there aren’t enough battle royales in the world.

Unknown to the MC, he has been caught up in a battle royale between ten different teams of waifus. Each with their own motivations, desires, and plans. All equally unaware of each other and the fight that will rage between them. It’s not just a battle for supremacy, but a battle of seduction.

The rules are very simple -- each contractor’s ultimate goal is to either kill or seduce every member of their enemy's harem along with the enemy contractor herself. All characters are only aware of their original settings, nor are the contractors aware of their selections prior to the battle royale. Waifus of the chosen setting are available to be claimed and once certain checkpoints have been met, additional choices from the Waifu Catalogue will become available.

The teams range from lawful good to chaotic evil, some will be heroes and others will be the most sinister of villains. The MC himself leans more towards Chaotic Good and it follows him as his desire to do some good is becoming increasingly complicated by a rapidly intertangled web of relationships between heroes and villains while he unwittingly fights to claim the prize of the battle royale -- a Tier 11 ticket.

Comments

aj0413

NTR, Rape, and Waifu Collections...gonna be honest, these all seem mostly like a downgrade in some sense to my fav currently on going stories. The DBZ and DC story revolve around the MC and it's a breath of fresh air not to have those elements (while the DC one clearly has Waifu's it feels natural)

Jay Futscher

Definitely Legends Never Die for sure. Always enjoy a story that historical fiction with a gamer element, but I have never seen one that wasn't a SI of some form. Him attributing it to the Gods is a thing that I would like to see explored.

serguzzle

I'm down with Gamer Viking. CK-derived absurdity and the uncertainty between "is it a system or spooky shit going on" with a protagonist who doesn't know better is also fun. I'm kind of intrigued by the waifu catalogue and its potential, but the Battle Royale concept sounds frankly exhausting potentially tangled up in a lot of sex (which isn't that interesting if there's that much). I can imagine some serious hype coming from it, but I don't know if the payoff would be worth it from the brief snippet we saw. Frankly, All Because I'm Evil sounds kind of boring and potentially mismatched in terms of scope/stakes/setting. I'm not entirely convinced. Also, obligatory "NTR is a shit fetish", and whatever. Legends Never Die sounds like it would be really funny with the modern narrative lens, a "we know something they don't" kind of take. Also, that pope story is legendary, wow.

RowanRen

You had me at vikings

Crow Productions

Legends Never Die hands down. I'm not gonna lie, I just don't enjoy Multicross that much to even consider that option, and Arcane is amazing but Kingdom Building is better.

BRBonobo

Legends Never Die is clearly the most original and interesting of the three. Not only is one a WC Fic (which I don't enjoy) and the other also Waifu based, they also feel like one of a thousand other fics I have read. Viking Historical Story with Gamer elements is an excellent premise, and you've managed to make all of the characters in it seem like actual people.

Jay Emberhowl

Legends never die seems like a unique idea ive not read before so id really enjoy reading it

Wanous

They're all good and I must have more chapters

anon patron

All these sound fun as hell, but I'm craving more arcane content, so throwing my hat in with that

Lazy Wizard

It’s a hard decision, because Legends Never Die sounds so interesting because I love Vikings and Crusader Kings. But Domain Expansion grabs me because I also really like Jujutsu Kaisen and DC. I guess if I had to do one, Legends Never Die since there is never enough CK stories and the Cannibal Pope story sounds awesome.

Real_Proster

Legends Never Die, Sound so Cool

Hrathen

Really not interested in another convoluted mess of a setting that is DC/Marvel. You haven't written a completely evil MC yet, so I'm very interested. Especially since your quality of writing is very high. Typically I'd like to know what I'm reading is about setting wise, hence not picking the historical story, I'd go read a book if that was a case for original fiction. To clarify, hypocrites are a huge pet peeve of mine, which is why a lot of stories about a MC trying to do "good" falls flat for me. Self delusion is cringe at the point for me as a veteran reader. Might have been fun when I was starting out, but not into angst, "woe is me", weight of the world on my shoulders etc.

Eldar Zecore

As someone who loves CK3 (didn’t get a PC until right after I dropped) I’m absolutely for Legends Never Die. Especially since I know about the how crazy and random shit can be

guymcfearsonm

Domain Expansion looks like it could be interesting The Sukuna powerset would be cool to see explored, and you could have a lot of fun with the magic side of DC, which tends to be pretty dark. However, WC is only enjoyable for me as a universal point buy companion focused isekai start. As soon as people start getting into buying, obsessing over builds, or in anyway interacting with the company, I lose interest. Additionally, we already have two works from you in DC. I like the setting, but I think it would be better to see you working on something new. The Viking CK gamer intro was really well done. I was concern I would end up turned off by edge at first, but it seems like whatever the MC will be, he won't be actively cruel. Seeing you develop your own original characters will also be interesting. It has my vote. I didn't really give the Evil story a chance. I just don't like evil MCs, especially not when they do it for fun. I generally find that mind control undermines the character dynamics that make fanfiction and crossovers interesting. I'm not really reading about the character I like, if they don't even control their own thoughts and actions. That's my take on it anyway.

NoStringsOnMe

Absolutely 100% need to read Domain Expansion

BarSit

Not sure how this is even remotely close in the polls. Legends was really compelling and I look forward to seeing you write a non-insertish character for once.

Akhjan Yerkin

Hope legends never die wins the poll, other ideas already have been explored but there is not much gamers element on a historical context story out there.

yabo

Really wanted to vote for the Sukuna SI, especially since you really kill it with the DC universe, but the waifu battle royale aspect is a bit of a turn off. So gamer Viking all the way!!!

Bud

Legends for sure. There's so much media to draw inspiration, and side characters from. Although, a potential challenge would be accurately portraying just how seriously people from that time period took their faith. If the MC has tangible magical powers, for example or is inhumanly strong, people will genuinely think he is either a God or a child of one. The Catholic church and the Christians of Europe also thought that Jesus would return to them around the year 1000 AD, something similar had happened in around 500AD aswell. They honestly and sincerely thought he was coming back, so he could get mistaken for a Angel or Servant of the Lord sent to prepare the way by the Christian. There are alot of ways you could play this, however if he starts performing miracles, or performing magic expect it to draw alot of attention and a large following. People have been granted Sainthood for praying to animals and trying to teach seals the bible, and the Viking did practice human sacrifice. If your going for realism, which i truly hope you are, its going to get Dark.

BuddhaBuddha

Legends all the way, the other two just seem so overdone or convulted.

Nitsua

Legends all the way. Historical Geners are super fun if done right and the idea of what a gamer would do in a historical timeline just sounds so fun to read. Cant wait!

Hrathen

After watching The Northman... I kinda want something like that now for Legends Never Die

Reisi

I'll be happy with either Legends or Waifu Battle Royale. Both sound rather interesting.

Bebop

I'm voting for legends never die cux it sounds like an awesome read but if your looking for more ideas maybe try out the mass effect universe?!?!

Anthony Essex

I voted for Domain Expansion doesn't look like it's gonna win though