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The end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is... (16,400 Words.)

https://wanderinginn.com/2024/08/11/the-roots-pt-2/

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JumpingPotatoSack

Someone’s been playing the critically acclaimed Stanley Parable 2 Ultra Deluxe edition. Should’ve won game of the year.

James Getgood

But is this the song that never ends?

Scott Soper

All work and no play makes Homer something something...

Jazz

you absolute goober you got me

Kage

Clever sonofagun

Kage

iHeartItSoHard

Jordan

Threw me for a freaking loop. Perfect way to make the readers figure it out themselves with a cliffhanger on the third one

Red

Standing ovation. Absolutely brilliant.

Brian Chen

What an incredible chapter! The way you make transitions to the next part and the twist at the very end. You are truly an amazing writer!

Rados

Stanley parable reference hell yessss. This chapter was awesomeeee! So excited for the next chapter

RedGoblin

Mrsha casually mentions the “grand design”

Anonymous

Trama for everyone!

Jordan

Thank you

RedMonty

Welp that was a bit of a mindscrew

Craig

She also refers to Ryoko being “the most correct about faeries”. “Ryoko” is the name that the grand design uses for Ryoka

Lawrence

Reminds me of the Unrealized Reality episode in Farscape. Nice Stanley Parable reference, too. Looking forward to more!

Lawrence

One chapter is not enough is not one chapter is not enough....

Miles Kidder

It was great, that one liner was incredibly terrifying. Didn't expect it, even though there were so many hints

Edda

Who needs drugs when there are chapters like these?

Valmorian

wow great chapter! I can't say I saw it coming but that's no surprise maybe in a reread. I absolutely loved it

Melry

I had so many feelings throughout this chapter. Very discombobulated but eagerly awaiting the continuation.

toni990

First of all I want to say I've Loved all of this story you have a very unique writing style and I cannot wait and I cannot emphasize this enough for the next chapter and I can tell you love your clip hangers when I got to the end I was like bloody pirates I say that with all love by the way can't wait to read the next one

Larc

Well this is downright fantastic.

Rukshan

Mrsha, the Great and Terrible

Rukshan

Only she can save Lyonette now

Robert Johansson

Here is hoping that Mrsha get her Levels back just to save her mom and Rags.

Jordan

When Mersha got her levels revoked I got legit mad…talk about proverbial blue balls!

Scott Soper

Can anyone point me to the part of the story where the Grand Design labels Ryoka "Ryoko"? I know it can't see her clearly but I thought it might know her name from other people's conversations.

Tartlet

Pretty sure that’s in an alternate fate?

RedGoblin

9.61 G lower half

RedGoblin

All the data the Grand Design appended was just vanishing into a void. It tried to fix it three times—and Ryoka’s entry wouldn’t reappear or come back. It couldn’t even make a new file on Ryoka. In the end, the Grand Design created a ‘Ryoko Griffin’ entry and logged everything new in there. If it had to reinstate her level…

Grey

I strongly suspect that the [Palace of Fate] visions only begin at the start of this chapter - things like Mrsha falling on her head line up with things said in Roots pt 1 by the Fae, and I don't notice any weird inconsistencies in the previous chapters, like Mrsha knowing the Grand Design's name instead of calling it the system.

Stephanie Creasy

I just realized the link on "slam" and the password doesn't appear to work. Anyone else having this issue?

Ennesby

password is in the author's notes at the bottom of The Roots Pt. 2, it's different than the chapter password

Rico Anthony

What was the password? I don't see any author's notes. Just comments.

Splutty

I too, missed Part 2-2 initially.

Sarah

Where do you enter the slam password? I just get links to “become a patreon” when I click the word and end up back here. Obviously I’m behind because no place to enter a password to 2 #1