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グレモリー家の没落ー敗北のオカ研ー第６話ー (Patreon)

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2024-11-27 11:42:43
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kaos

Good job! Wanna see more about this series.

Shiki

Page 11, 12: wrong color on Rias text I think... It is orange instead red unless i the background give false illusion xD Page 45: text is being cut on right.. end with: you p I assume it would be you pig? xD So you need to put it a bit to left. On story... Damn that end of episode was chef's kiss. Somehow I was expecting/hoping for something like that to happen xD On other note.. Remember when we discussed the -sama when you put both -sama and Lady and I recommended you to follow one or another? Well since everyone else is using the japanese sufixes like -san -kun -sama the obvious choice would be to put all with -sama when they were saying Lady. I just noticed that a few episodes later and now revert all Lady to -sama I don't know if you want to do it now... but in the end the product would be using all the same sufix. If you are willing to revert them I don't mind searching them myself on all episodes. And sorry about the mistake that lead you write that way. If you don't want is ok but it was just to have everything the same way. Have a nice day and cheers!

basenokim
>>156568574

Pages 11 and 12 are fine. Page 45 has been corrected. Please understand that whether you call him Lord or sama, they both have the same meaning.