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性知識ゼロの雷電将軍を一週間以内にメス豚落ちさせろ！ー第6話ー (Patreon)

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2024-02-07 11:00:06
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Shiki

I know you use the auto translation but this time was bad choice of words from within. Some times was confusing to see what message was trying to say (like page 11). Second thing, more about how you present the text is confusing. Let me ask: Do we read your work from right to left like japanese manga way or left to right like in western comics? And up to down must be obvious. Because when I am reading looks like to be right to left sometimes and then other is left to right. To end, and now related to this story end I thought when you said they would put her in the statue my first thought was them petrify her in a shameful way to everyone see her current state forever while she being alive and conscious of the shame. Now is going to be FGO time! Good luck!

basenokim
>>129070162

I'm sorry for my poor English. It's hard for me to check for mistranslations in three languages by myself.

Shiki

It is ok. We are here to help if you need. Now answer this question since has been on my head for a while if you can please. It might be useful for you when you are making the English text placement for the future releases. How you place the text? I know you are Japanese so when I read your works I read this way: Top-right, Bottom-Right, Top-Left and Bottom-Left. This the Manga way. When there is 2 texts I read Top then Bottom or should I read from Bottom-Right then Top-Left or Top-Left then Bottom Right for example? Or if there are 2 texts on Top or Bottom which we read first? The Right then Left or Left then Right? I am asking this so when you do the next works there is fixed order how to read and no one will feel lost. :) Cheers. EDIT: ups I wanted to do a reply but made a new post by mistake.

basenokim
>>129159058

When I placed the text, I focused on placing it close to the margin and the position of the character. From now on, we will place the text in order from the top left to the bottom right.

Shiki
>>129159058

Ah I was with that idea of being the case but that was making confusing to read sometimes. Because some times the character was looking to left and other times right and then there was several characters talking too. So this means you will put the next in English with western style ok. One suggestion I could give was making different border color for characters (based on hair color is common), so you know who is talking following same pattern of text placing. I hope the example I put down it isn't very confusing to you understand what I was trying to say. Once again, good luck and keep the good work :) Example based on this episode 6 to show inconsistency on reading which can lead to confusion: Page 7 has Raiden turned to left so you put her text Top-Left and then the other guy talk on Bottom Right. Here I was reading first Bottom-Right then Top-Left. Page 8 has both on Bottom and I was reading Right then Left. Page 12-15 is like you said. You put the text closer to the guys talking. But again my reading order was again right to left. Page 20 this time has guy talk and Raiden and text both on top. I read this left then right in this case. Page 23 has both text on Left but what made sense to read was Bottom-Left then Top-Left. I read guy text then Raiden. Page 44 has guy and Raiden text where guy is on Top-Left and Raiden is Bottom Right and made sense to read Top then Bottom. Page 46 has guy and Raiden text where guy is Bottom-Right and Raiden Top Left. Read Guy text then Raiden. Page 51 has 4 text spreading left and right going down so I was reading from top to bottom.