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最強ギャルルシア虐めていた子に催眠アプリでわからせー第2話ー (Patreon)

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2024-02-28 11:00:11
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2026-06
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Shiki

I must be late to say this since was the release 2 but it isn't the title in English wrong? I mean it is a boy (he) that uses an hypnosis app to make her hypnotized. But the title appear as "she defeats the child she was bullying using a hypnotic app". That would make sense if it was a girl taking revenge but it isn't the case. So the correct title would be better as: "She get defeated by the boy she was bullying with a hypnosis app" or "He defeats the girl that was bullying him by using a hypnosis app" Also on the next page where say: "She uses a hypnosis app to put her classmate, a boy she always bullied, into a hypnotic state..." seems messed up. It should be something like this: "He uses a hypnosis app to put her classmate, a girl that bullied him always, into a hypnotic state..." I am telling this because how it is now seems is she who is using the hypnosis app on him (roles reversed) but it isn't. I bet the auto translation got confused and exchanged the genders for the opposite meaning. Note: My mother tongue it isn't English. So the way I spelled might be not 100% accurate but at least it is less confusing. Note 2: Do not change those lines before other readers check or if agree or not to make change. Aside the title and that page 2 didn't see anything messed up... It is understandable. Keep the good work, cheers.

basenokim
>>130916681

Thank you for pointing out the mistranslation. I changed it as you said. Thank you very much. It would be helpful if you let me know if there are any mistranslations next time.

dd

yeah! lucia