Feedback request (Patreon)

Hey guys! I know that you all are already supporting me, and this means a lot for me! But I'd like to ask you about one more thing - feedback. I'm only the beginner artist and my "style" is not the only thing that need improvement. I'm also still not as good in text as I want to be... So I'm asking you about feedback. Anything you find important to say to me: not enough shades, too boring text, bad panels position - anything. This would help me to make the next pages better! This is not only about incoming pages. The feedback about all previous pages are also very welcome! Thanks for understanding!