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Sketch wip of demon lord comic page 5-6 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-10-08 18:39:08
Edited:
2019-10-16 09:30:43
Imported:
2026-06
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As always the text still rought and my grammar still awful so any help are appreciate.

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Roxanne13579

Sent a grammar check on discord ^.^

RedeemerofDark

Wait...are you serious? "You should have died from your wound"? "The church told me what would happen after the Demon Lord was slain". Your kidding, so they both knew this would happen and we're essentially told to or planned to get rid of him as soon as possible once he did his part? They used him? Heheheh...well if that's the case then I expect the hero to change them into TRUE companions now that they know they were planning on betraying the Hero from the start.

RedeemerofDark

Also props on actually making one of these stories where the change is either encouraged or enforced without someone having to just be painfully rewritten, it's a nice change of pace and revenge tf is some of the best TF for recently changed to do to people~

ElSalsaRey

Good work. Word suggestions. Instead of “my souls are become yours”, say “my souls have become yours”. Then and “be” between “will” and “reborn”. But still, great stuff. Can’t wait to see the finished product

Stormfries

love tg mindcontrol with transformation hmmm