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Liliraune comic page 1-2 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-06-30 21:54:30
Imported:
2026-06
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Here it's is the first two complete color page!

If you found  any error feel free to tell men in the comment.

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Comments

Victor

looks nice and clean

M1yago

Oh I wasn't expecting Lucia to be a red hair at all, I thought she would be a brunette, since the plain look works well for a cold character

ElSalsaRey

Very nice. I like the full design

Arbiter

The colours look wonderful! I look forward to when more comes in due course :)

seth neumann

I agree with the other comments the colors look very nice keep up the awesome work

D. B

GTFO in big letters both are pretty dumb

Asani

:stoic Vorlon agreement:

Nathaniel Merrill

Page 1, box 1, “dumb as rock” to either “dumb as a rock” or “dumb as rocks” take your pick

Asani

Going all in on the anime faces was definitely the right call for this comic. I drink that milkshake, and then keep on slurping to get the last little tasty bits at the bottom of the cup. Page 2 especially, Lucia hanging there like a dead fish is the tits! Here’s what I spotted:

Asani

1.1 - 1.2 {There should be a comma or probably a semicolon after their names, and their trades should be written as "Apprentice Blacksmith" or "Blacksmith's Apprentice"} 1.1.2 [Dumb as a Rock / Subtle as a Hammer Blow] 1.2.1 Ms Gorilla => Ms. Gorilla 1.3.3 years => year's 1.4.4 jackpot => mark 2.1.1 ... You stole my idea and are trying to sabotage me! 2.1.2 ... By working together, we can increase our chances of finding the nectar, yes? 2.4.1 this was => this is

ibenz009

I try aqua blue and she look too much like rei ayanami.

M1yago

I could see that indeed