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Demon lord chapter2 p12-16 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-11-29 15:10:46
Edited:
2023-09-12 11:06:57
Imported:
2026-06
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Sorry for taking a while. 

I wish I could work faster  but here is a update on demon lord comic.  

Hope I manage to wrap this up within 10 page.

If you found any mistake or have any suggestion feel free to post it in the comment.

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CrazedGamma1721

Really hope that she keeps her personality safe.

StarGazer

10 more pages? Wow this is a big one. Still love how it's coming along. I do find it curious that the Demon Lord is planning on changing Aria's personality.

Roxanne13579

Awesome! Okay, edits coming up!

Roxanne13579

Page 1: 1: How are you feeling, Aria? We are almost done with your transformation. Don't worry. I won't alter your personality like I did with Gilda. Heh, Gilbert just let me turn him into whatever I want... he must really feel guilty about this whole mess. 2: Are you still resisting? Are you still holding on to the hope that you can still save me? Ghghh I'm touched, Aria. I really am. 3: Let me give you a reward for your determination. How about a kiss from the demon lord.

Roxanne13579

page 2: 1 - 2: He...ro... 3: Now, sleep tight Aria. Your final metamorphosis is about to begin. I said I won't alter your personality but there is no guarantee that you will still be the same when you come out. 4: So try your best not to lose yourself in there...

Roxanne13579

Page 3: 1: Oh, I almost forgot. you dropped this. 2: We can't have you going around without your staff, can we? 3: It's like you said. A mage without her staff is like a bird without its wings. I shall leave her to you, Gilda. Her form in this stage is highly unstable. Any foreign element can cause a mutation. I don't want to come back and find out that she has turned into a blob of shadow, understood? Don't let Aria eat anything weird. Gotcha! you can leave it to me, my goddess! 4: Alright! All set! Looks like it's just the two of us now, Aria. Are you comfy in there? You just sleep tight and let Gilda take care of you.

Roxanne13579

Page 4: 1: I wonder what you're seeing in there. 2: Where... am I... Am I dead? No. Not quite, Aria. 3: Hello, Aria. It's so nice to finally meet you face to face. Who are you? Why do you look like me? Well, what did you imagine your subconscious to look like? 4: So, how does it feel to finally meet your inner self? No... you're just an illusion... a fake... Awww, don't be like that. You can share anything with me, "me". 5: Such as the fact that you are actually enjoying this, aren't you?

Roxanne13579

Page 5: 1: You don't have to hide it. You are secretly thinking that this is not so bad, aren't you? The thought may be small but it's there. You think that if it lets me be by the hero's side again, maybe being a demon is worth the price. Why I know this, you ask? Heh heh heh, because I am "you". 2: No... no you're wrong! 3: Silly "me". We can't lie to each-other. It doesn't work like that. Some part of you enjoys it, doesn't it? Being reshaped to serve the hero. To be with him for eternity. No, I would never! Just imagine it. 4: We will be together with the hero and Gilbert again, like nothing ever happened. We can get back at those humans for using us. For forcing Gilbert to betray the hero. We can be by the hero's side forever. To serve him. To slaughter them all for him.

Mokinokaro

Pretty sure that's the direction we're going. Or at least a final Aria who is her honest self.

John Hynden

Please dont let Aria become evil and slaughter people :(

ChaosOverlordZ

dont worry about it taking awhile. We are pationt.

Asani

That’s part of the demon job description, love. ^^

Arbiter

Your comics just keep getting better and better. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops!

D. B

impressive work so far

RedeemerofDark

Aww! See this is what I was talking about! We aren't forsaking her past for the sake of a quick corruption. It's being taken into account! It still has meaning! And Aria really isn't being forced to do anything, from the looks of it she's merely being encouraged to accept her true feelings, that she'll be happy to be with her team again, that they'll be happy together, that they can punish those that tried to drive them apart! Aria may not realize it yet, but this is one of the best possible outcomes to what happened, she's lucky she isn't in one of the depressing outcomes where they were wiped clean into mindless drones as tortuously and painfully as possible. At least they all were able to enjoy these changes~ And should be able to continue doing so~

Arxynos

I hope at the end the humans are actually the bad ones just like how gilbert betray the hero Reveals that human nature has more demon characteristics than demon itself while the former demon lord that fuse with the hero were only meant to maintain and protect their race by taking over the hero and his party and also revenge against the bad humans and bring piece to both factions

Arxynos

Also I think it would be nice to see an emotional ending after Aria fully transformed as she agrees to sided with the demon lord she quickly hugs the demon lord still believes in her still role as the hero in tears as she misses the bond being together as a team

MagicCobra911

I am pleasantly surprised to see this go on a bit longer. I didn’t think this would have more pages than part one particularly since it involves one character transforming not two.

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 @RedeemerofDark The funny thing is, before seeing today's pages, there was a non-con element in the metamorphosis of Aria when I was drafting my adaptation. You wouldn't mind if I keep that part in, right? Also, based on concept art, I always assumed that Aria would end up more melancholy.

MagicCobra911

@AceTriad I look forward to seeing your adaptation!😃

Hydeang

I really like the process but I hope they're a twist with Aria who succeed to stay true to herself and be a double agent working also to save the human. In my opinion, it will be a bit bland if she's just converted.

Arthur Yeung

@Asani Gonna make your edits this week?

l3ad-1uck

Thank you so much for doing edits on the dialog. This is probably my favorite piece of art from 2020, and proper edits really make it polished and its amazing to see it come out so well!

John Hynden

i do believe that there are good demons. wouldnt it be nice to have dark, corrupted and kind demoness?

Asani

Okay, here's my usual pile-on. Sorry for the delay. >_<

Asani

{} = comment () = optional change or addition [] = pick one / = alternatives 12.1.1 How are you feeling, Aria? We are almost... 12.1.2 Don't worry, you won't end up blindly devoted to me like dear, sweet Gilda (over there). 12.1.3 Heh, Gilbert really was wracked by guilt after the whole betrayal thing and (pretty much / basically) let me do whatever I wanted with him. 12.2.1 It seems you're still resisting though. Holding out hope I can yet be saved, are we? 12.3.1 Such determination deserves a reward. 12.3.2 How about a kiss from your (new) Demon Lord?

Asani

13.2 {Tilt Aria's head forward and move it up a little as a transition into panel 3.} 13.3.1 Sweet dreams, Aria. Your... 13.3.2 I don't intend to rewrite your personality, but there may well be some... realignments. {I tried to leave it ambiguous exactly how much Demon Lord is influencing the process.} 13.4 So try not to lose yourself in there(, okay)... {Took out "your best" to make it roll off the tongue easier.}

Asani

14.1 Oh, I almost forgot. You dropped this. 14.2 We can't have you running around without your staff, now can we? 14.3.1 It's like you (always) said, a mage without her staff is like a bird without wings. 14.3.2 I'm leaving things in your capable hands, Gilda. At this stage (of the process) her form is highly unstable; any foreign element could cause mutation. {Shift the panel break over so this sentence gets grouped into the next panel. Or fit this text into the space above Gilda's head with what's there already. 14.4.1 I don't want to come back and find (my) Aria has turned into an amorphous blob of shadow, understand? {Went back and forth on "understood" vs. "understand", but I think "understand" works better since Gilda repeats back her own interpretation of Demon Lord's directive.} 14.4.2 ...weird, gotcha! Leave it to me, Goddess! 14.5.1 look => looks 14.5.2 (take care => watch over)

Asani

15.1 you see => you're [dreaming / seeing] 15.2.1 I'm => am... 15.2.2 I'm => Am... 15.2.3 [Not exactly. / Not quite.] {Consider using a different font / effect for Shadow Aria's dialogue.} 15.3.3 I'm your subconscious, silly. Who else would I look like? 15.4.1 (inner => real / true) 15.4.2 No... you're just an illusion... a fake... 15.4.3 Aww, don't be [such a spoil sport / like that]. You can share anything with me, "me". 15.5.1 Like the fact that you are actually enjoying this. {I feel Shadow Aria should use more direct statements since she has full knowledge of Aria's inner world, but rhetorical questions work too.}

Asani

16.1.1 Come now, you don't have to hide it. "This is really not so bad," am I right? 16.1.2 Of course I am. There's a kernel of desire that yearns to be by Hero's side again, even if the price is becoming a demon. You're wondering how I know. Heh heh, that's because [I AM you / I'm "you"]. 16.2.1 No, (no, )you're wrong... (that can't be!) 16.3.2 A part of you is loving this, being [reformed / reshaped] to serve at Hero's side for (all) eternity. {"He" seems like a "she" at this point, but I wager people have irreconcilable opinions on the matter. Better to just cut out pronouns.} 16.4.1 The three of us back together again, like nothing ever happened. And we can move against the humans who forced (poor) Gilbert to betray Hero. 16.4.2 Together forever... Faithfully serving Hero... Slaughtering those treacherous humans... {Pronouns... 😖}

Bhumpharn

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