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Demon lord chapter 2 p16 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-04-29 15:55:55
Edited:
2023-09-12 11:07:27
Imported:
2026-06
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I've spend way too much time on the last panel. My monkey brain can't draw symmetrical  face. 

So yeah as usual  any mistake or suggestion let's me know.

Special thank for those who always help me with dialouge. and grammar i'm truly grateful.

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Victor

Wow looks good

MagicCobra911 (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-05 06:00 Wel Damn for some reason it didn’t occur to me that the Demon Lord was going to be naked in that reunion panel😏. This page looks very good and flows quite well.
2021-04-29 15:59 Wel Damn for some reason it didn’t occur to me that the Demon Lord was going to be naked in that colored reunion panel😏. This page looks very good and flows quite well.

Wel Damn for some reason it didn’t occur to me that the Demon Lord was going to be naked in that colored reunion panel😏. This page looks very good and flows quite well.

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Truth be told, I actually thought the sketch was anatomically correct!

spectria.limina (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-05 06:00 Panel 3 missing a period after "each other". "It's" -> "it" (it's is a contraction for "it is").
2021-04-29 16:00 Panel 3 missing a period after "each other". "It's" -> "it" (it's is a contraction for "it is").

Panel 3 missing a period after "each other". "It's" -> "it" (it's is a contraction for "it is").

MagicCobra911

I am a little confused though about Aria’s decisions after this, it didn’t seem like she was conflicted, just that she had a little more attitude/feistiness to her personality.

spectria.limina (edited)

Comment edits

2026-10-12 20:00 Panel 4, "get back on" -> "get back at" (not much to say, prepositions are hard). "Those human" -> "those humans". "They dirty work" -> "their dirty work" (possessive). "Those church" doesn't quite work as "church" isn't a noun for people. Either "the church" or use it like an adjective: "those church people" like "those church scum", etc. "That've forced" is probably better as "that forced" imo, but that might just be because of the fact that the comic is spread put. "that've" kind of implies something recent and new, as opposed to something that's buried in the past. Or it implies emphasis. Also if you change to "the church" it would need to be "that's" to match the singular. Either way, "betrayed" -> "betray" because it is in a relative clause, so it needs to be the infinitive.
2021-04-29 16:03 Panel 4, "get back on" -> "get back at" (not much to say, prepositions are hard). "Those human" -> "those humans". "They dirty work" -> "their dirty work" (possessive). "Those church" doesn't quite work as "church" isn't a noun for people. Either "the church" or use it like an adjective: "those church people" like "those church scum", etc. "That've forced" is probably better as "that forced" imo, but that might just be because of the fact that the comic is spread put. "that've" kind of implies something recent and new, as opposed to something that's buried in the past. Or it implies emphasis. Also if you change to "the church" it would need to be "that's" to match the singular. Either way, "betrayed" -> "betray" because it is in a relative clause, so it needs to be the infinitive.

Panel 4, "get back on" -> "get back at" (not much to say, prepositions are hard). "Those human" -> "those humans". "They dirty work" -> "their dirty work" (possessive). "Those church" doesn't quite work as "church" isn't a noun for people. Either "the church" or use it like an adjective: "those church people" like "those church scum", etc. "That've forced" is probably better as "that forced" imo, but that might just be because of the fact that the comic is spread put. "that've" kind of implies something recent and new, as opposed to something that's buried in the past. Or it implies emphasis. Also if you change to "the church" it would need to be "that's" to match the singular. Either way, "betrayed" -> "betray" because it is in a relative clause, so it needs to be the infinitive.

Arbiter

Ah the what-if if Aria had simply accepted her darker side. The three look wonderful together!

Ian Hsieh

I cant wait to see the entire thing finished and I can watch it through instead of page by page.

spectria.limina

Her corruption is so good... I want to see her give in!

StarGazer

everyday life serving a demon lord

Stormfries

amazing !! men changed in a sexy devilin

D. B

I love it

D. B

sign me up

MagicCobra911

Despite not really leading to anything (yet?) it is interesting, makes me wish that we got to see Gilbert’s mental breakdown in comic form.

UltraOrbZero (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-05 06:00 This has got to be my favorite series <3
2021-04-29 21:25 This has got to be my favorite series <3

This has got to be my favorite series <3

Asani

“Come to the Demon Side, ‘me’. We have soft breasts, thicc thighs, and revenge on those bastard humans.”

Radiant Xyz

The time you spent at the last panel... was ABSOLUTELY worth it! It looks great!!

Emma Draper

If Aria's not interested in joining up, is the Demon Lord taking applications for sexy demon henchladies? ...asking for a friend.

Arthur Yeung

@Emma Draper I've been working on an adaptation that involves a couple Demon OCs in a nightmare sequence of this.

Exa

You're always really great at drawing those evil expressions!