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Liquid mercury RE p19-20 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-05-19 22:46:51
Edited:
2022-05-30 02:05:05
Imported:
2026-06
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15 page remain... I want to punch the past ibenz now.

Anyway another 2 page done. If you found any mistake feel free to post it in the comment.

Next one brainwashed! brainwashed! 

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PhoenixFire

Hey, I've sent you a dm with some suggestions for corrections a few days ago. Dont think you've seen it so far :)

ibenz009

Thank just check it. Thank for your help.

Nobody-Kadaj

On page 19, I think her quote needs to says "rulers" instead of "rules" since she is wanting her legacy to rule the world. On page 20, I believe she should say "They need to learn their place" instead of "They need to learn they place" since the former is more grammatically correct in English.

Keimori

You might want to kick past Ibenz,but I love this. I want to thank you for all the time and effort you're taking to make such a fun and enjoyable comic.

Canti

You say you want to kick your past self, but without that past, there would be no present

Canti

Also, I think you might want it to read as “when I tried to rebuild my house’s reputation and wealth” and “they need to learn their place”

Justin George

I'm an English teacher, so I'd be happy to go through all of your pages with a fine-toothed comb when you're done. Not to downplay the corrections of anyone here of course, but I have noticed some errors that slipped through and haven't thought to comment on them until now.

Fii-B

It is lovely, I can't wait to see Amelia get her comeuppance

Rubyinabox

Sadily Permanent brain tampering is where I drop off, plus these kinda bad guys never face justice. Great art though! Love the work!

Pascal

cool

桃濑响

Will her foot change?

Arbiter

Looking good! ^^

too shy for nicknames

Past ibenz would surely be as impressed by how far your skills have come as much as we are! :3

Drijunior

I really need to say this, in pg19, Amelia's reflection look really weird, because it does not looks like it's a reflection. Besides that, it's amazing.