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Miko spider corruption p3-4 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-09-28 22:14:15
Imported:
2026-06
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Ok another draft done. 

As always if you have any suggestion or found any grammar mistake feel free to tell me in the comment.

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StarGazer

Wow she looks amazing already!

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Will the bodyguard be corrupted too?

Stephen Bordley

Not 100% but think the top middle panel should go like this. A divine vessel 'needs' to be pure form any mortal 'taint'

Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)

Oh some very lovely work. Did find some grammar problems with the last sentence. You wrote "Kneel, as goddess stand before you." A better way to write that would be "Kneel, as a goddess stands before you."

Von Hentai

Pure *from*, but otherwise yep

Arbiter

Oh awesome stuff! Now to deal with her companion ^^

ElSalsaRey

Page 1 Panel 1: "Taint of mortality" Panel 2: "Taint" Panel 3: "Embarrass" Panel 4: "I'll teach you how a proper priestess should behave" Panel 5: "...screamed...a cockroach (not the)..."she must really BE out of her mind..." Page 2 Panel 3: "I am no longer THE Mikoto you know." Panel 4: "I am Yame-Hime, Avatar of THE Goddess who rule this mountain. Hmmm...where are your manners, mortal? Kneel, as a goddess stands before you." (eliminate "A" in front of "Avatar" or replace it with "An" or "The") Those are my grammatical thoughts.

ElSalsaRey

But fantastic as usual

ibenz009

Thanks and thank you for grammar edited.